The Alien Invasion
Flying horses, transforming dogs and spaceships… brought to you in musical Doric!
P4 Donbank Primary school know how to tell a great story.
Add comment November 29th, 2007
Archive for November, 2007
The Nasty Witch
What did the nasty witch do to the poor cat… and where does the monkey fit into the story?
Watch this musical animation by Primary 3 at St Peter’s RC School to find out!
2 comments November 24th, 2007
Murder Scene
In the middle of nowhere, it was a wintry cold storm. There lived an old man called George, who was very lonely. He was watching T.V and he heard the birds giving their signal to go sleep. He watched all the birds fly away. After that he went to get a drink of water, but the water wasn’t coming through! So George went outside to pump up the taps, just one thing he did wrong! He left the door open.
Meanwhile someone came into the old Cottage and hid in the kitchen. Five minutes after, George came back in and went straight to the kitchen to get a drink, gladly the water was coming through! As he was away to go back to the window he got stabbed twice in the back. He was left to die in pain for 10 whole minutes.
Shortly after, he died. The killer took George’s body up the stairs. And put it in the room and locked it. About 3 months later the killer turned the old cottage into a museum. Plenty of people came to see the museum. It cost £12.00 for an adult and £2.00 for a child to come in and see the museum. But one day a family came into see the museum and the killer was giving them a tour of the house, he said “ and this is his room where he studied about birds”. The teenager was part of the family who were coming to see the museum went upstairs when you were not allowed up stairs.
She tried to open the door where George’s body was but it was locked. She went into the bathroom the bath was full of blood with a dead body lying in it. She screamed so loud, her mum and dad came running up the stairs, they asked her what was wrong? She pointed to the bath they all screamed. The killer ran up the stairs and killed them all!
By Ashleigh
4 comments November 23rd, 2007
The Dead Ranger
In the middle of the countryside where animals roam free there is a forest where the animals live in fear. There is huge house with great big doors with a ranger’s car parked outside of them. The huge wooden doors were still wide open. Inside the house there was a huge hall with a chandelier hanging from the ceiling and on the side of the wall there were hundreds of boars, dears, stags and foxes heads on the wall. There was a room that went off to the left that looked a lot like a dining room with a pile of letters on it and a gun on the top of them. The gun was still loaded with just one bullet missing from it. There was a foot poking out from behind the settee. It was the ranger, dead with a bullet in his head. As you go back into the hall you could see that there were two guns missing from the wall. As you walk up the long spiral stairs you could here the shot of a gun and as you went upstairs into the old man’s room, there was a broken window. Looking out through the broken window you could see an old lifeless body lying on the shrubs …
By Patrick
Add comment November 23rd, 2007
T h e m u r d e r o f t o m
Far far away in the dark countryside lived a little lonely cottage near a river where nobody seemed to live, there were broken windows and a door that looks like it’s been cut in half… believe it or not somebody used to live here BUT strangely not anymore. What happened?
Lots and lots of people have gone past this house but haven’t noticed it because its covered by trees and leaves but after all this time it has been abandoned. Some old man came out looking for some firewood… and after all these years finally it’s been noticed. He went over to discover it.
He quietly opened the squealing door and squealed HELLO IS ANYBODY HERE! He got no reply so just carried on looking around the house… There were about 6 rooms in the house.
In one room he could hear a TV on so he walked in the room minding his own business, but nobody seemed to be there! Something shocking caught his eye: there was a knife on the bed with bright red blood all over it, he stopped and stared at the wall, which was cover with thick horrible looking blood…
He slowly walked out of the room without making a single squeak just in case something happened to him. He must have realised something wasn’t right.
He saw another door, which looked suspicious because of the hand stained blood mark on the door. He slowly opened it thinking what might happen!
It looked like there was somebody in the bed, he crept over and pulled the cover off the bed to find someone’s loose head and one finger! AHHHH he went to run out the door but it shut on his face and locked …
D e m i
1 comment November 23rd, 2007
A Mystery
You walked down Clifton Road, and there it was sat right in the middle of street. The door had been knocked down of its hinges and inside some ornaments had smashed and the sofa, ripped to shreds. There was an open door leading to the bathroom. The toilet had been smashed just like the ornbements and the bath had little peices of the toliet. The sink was in perfect condition apart from a few chips around the bottom.
There was an arch shaped door with 3 wooden steps leading down to the kitchen. There was a large wooden table with cut vegetables with a knife sitting next to it. There were some empty hooks that swung back and forth. They were for the knifes. When you properly entered the room there was the knifes stuck deep into the thick wooden door. There was blood on a few of them and a blood trail leading towards a room. It was a storage room, and as you turned on the lights a body hung from it. Who could it be? By Hannah
Add comment November 23rd, 2007
Crime Seen
Across the road, the door was wide open. In the hall a picture of the women and a man (leaning against the wall). In the living room was a table and two sofas, behind the table was an ice-skate with blood stained on the blade, and around the ice-skate was a pool of blood. Stuffed down the side of the sofa was the other ice-skate.
In the kitchen was a washing machine, wide open. Next to the washing machine was a washing basket and in the washing basket was a white t-shirt stained with blood. Next to the kitchen door, were stairs that lead upstairs? There were about seven or eight stairs.
Up the stairs was a bedroom, in the bedroom was a dresser with lots of medals on it, next to all the medals was a note, the note said “ Dear Jack, I’m sorry for what I’ve done, it never meant to happen.” Love Becky.
By Natalie
1 comment November 23rd, 2007
Mystery
There was a car that had been smashed up. The front of it had been all crushed up and it seemed like the car had been abandoned. The windows were smashed and the seats totally wrecked. The boot was open. In the boot there were golf clubs with blood over them. There were also stains of blood over the wrecked seats. There was a massive hole in the car where the radio or cd player would usually be.
People living in that area had heard that the person who drove the car had split up with her husband recently. They had been having a lot of arguments. The lady had found a new boyfriend. Nobody had seen her for weeks and was starting to become suspicious about what had happened. People knew where the lady lived so decided to go and investigate the house.
As they entered the house they saw photographs all over the floor and glass everywhere. In the kitchen there were smashed plates and the kitchen was a total mess. The people thought someone had been in the house and just totally wrecked it. They also thought the person wrecking it had fled in a hurry. They decided to tell the police but a few weeks later the police still hadn’t made much progress. Also the lady or her new boyfriend still hadn’t been seen.
By Owen
St Machar Academy
1 comment November 23rd, 2007
THE FROSTY CARAVAN
On a frosty day at Alexander farm there was a caravan. It must have crashed through the fence. The caravan’s paint was scratched as it had a large stick man picture with lots of stick men sleeping. There was oil leading from the fence to the caravan. The caravan was still the right way up. I looked inside the smashed window and there was a dead man! But not just dead because of the crash. He was shot! It was right in the head.
I went right to the door. The door was not locked. I went inside. There was a picture of a family. The man who got shot was there but there was a bit ripped out of the photo. Most of the stuff was scattered everywhere. There was a bullet left on the floor. I saw a note, it said:
I am after you!
From your DEAR brother
There was a video recorder on the floor and it was still recording …
Add comment November 23rd, 2007
Mystery Crime
It was a winter day and the door of the isolated house at the end of the street wide open.
The house was quite big and made out of wood, mud and straw. The door number of the house was knocked off and the door was off its hinges. Inside there was a strong smell of burning wood. There was smashed glass on the floor. And in the chest of drawers cupboard an album lay open. There were three wedding photos and a photo was missing.
There were medals on the floor and little boat figures smashed on the floor and books about sailing and some of the pages had been torn out.
The house number lay next to an empty bottle of ketchup.
In the sink were dirty pans and pots that stunk and had not been washed for weeks. The smell of burning got stronger. The phone was making odd beeping noises and vaguely could hear a voice. The noises stopped and it hung up. There was movement in the room next door and a light switched on blood was leaking from under the door. The door slowly opened by the wind of the front door, the window was wide open and blood on the floor.
By Caitie
Add comment November 23rd, 2007
