Archive for December 14th, 2007
On the morning of December 4th it was sunny. I brushed my teeth and got dressed. When I went outside I saw a big pink house and the door was open. I stood beside the door and knocked on it but no one answered. So I went in. It was a like a palace and it smelt of perfume. It was a great smell.
I walked over to a door which said Dressing Room. I went in. It was a mess and there were shoes and dresses all over the floor. I picked up a dress, and there was also a diary which said, “Fashion Show on Monday December the 5th”. I was scared because there was red lipstick on the wall. There were fashion magazines on the floor. I went upstairs and there were photographs of models and wool and knitting needles on the floor. The phone was also on the floor, with make-up scattered around.
I went down the stairs into the kitchen and saw photographs of family pets. I saw a piece of paper and it said, “Stock Number 536″. I was getting a bit scared and ran out of the door.
Jade
Seaton Primary School
December 14th, 2007
It was a cold and silent night, just as it was last night but there was somthing that I could not put my finger on. There was scratching all over the walls. I carried on going through the house and I just put my foot in the door and…hisssssss!!! AARGH, A HORNED ADDER!!! IT bit my foot but I managed to shake it off my foot. I looked to my left and I saw an open cage and beside it was a ticket and it said: ‘Dear Mr Smith, you have been placed in the final five. Sky and Storm are the best pair I have seen in years. Hope you will make it. Sincerely Jamie.’
Squeak,squeak I looked back two gerbels they had collars that said Sky and Storm. I picked them both up. They were very nice. I walked into the kitchen and gave them some food and cleaned their cage and put them back in and locked it.
by liam
December 14th, 2007
I walked into my friend’s house but no one was in. I shouted for her, she didn’t answer me. I went in her room and there were lots of ice-skating dresses on her bed. There were ice-skating leaflets on her dressing table and there were pet show leaflets as well and they both were on the same day and there today. There was my diary so I went to pick it up. There was a page saying, going ice-skating on April the tenth so I realised that it wasn’t my diary. My one was on the other table. There were ice-skates lying on the floor. I nearly tripped over a pair. There was a bag of make-up on the bed too.
I went in another room, all her animals were in there. There was an entry form saying that she enterd an ice-skating contest and there were lots of photos on the wall and on the fire place are lots trophies. I went out into the back garden and there was a huge ice rink. I went back inside and there were lots of photos with her and her pets. I wonder where she is?
Ashleigh
December 14th, 2007
I had been called to go and visit my uncle Joe. The next day I went to see him. I took the bus to East road. When I got to his house, it looked very very old. I knocked on the door; dust swept into my face as my shaking hand smacked on it. I was very nervous. I had never been to my uncle’s house before, he had only been to my house. He never answered. I opened the door. It wasn’t locked. He should have locked it. There are a lot of burglars in this road. As I walked in, it smelled like wet leather. There was a shelf on a wall there were about ten football trophies on it. On the living room door handle were a pair of boxing gloves. In a corner of the kitchen there were football boots on top of a sheet of newspaper. On the counter there was a note saying.
Sorry I’m not here. I couldn’t miss ENGLAND vs JAPAN,there is a ticket to let you come and see the match. But if you get here on the 30th of November, thats it, you have missed the match. Bye Bye uncle Joe.
I went on to look around the house. I went into his bedroom, there were footballs everywhere. I looked at the wall, there was an Aberdeen strip on it. Then I heard a strange creeping noise from the wardrobe, I opened it. BOO! It was my uncle and he had scared me. I ran away home. But uncle Joe had fallen to his knees with laughter. Anyway, it was April fools day.
Darren
December 14th, 2007
I was walking down a weird street. I didn’t know why I was called here. The windows were smashed and on the fence was a padlock but nothing there. The padlock was snapped into in to two bits I thought someyhing might of been stolen.
When I entered the house I was a bit scared but I saw a photograph of someone on the motor bike in the garden. But when I started to look around, this person looked like he loved sports through and through. I found boxing gloves and footballs but when I saw a corner unit there was nothing in it . I knew this house was a bit strange. I felt a strong breeze so I went through to the kitchen. The tumble drier was on full pelt and the window was smashed. When I went through to the livingroom there was ps2 controls but they were broken . I smelt something like the smell of bacon, so I thought they must of left in the morning. Then I heard the voice mail and it said “Jim…be back on monday…see you soon… love you.
georeg
December 14th, 2007
I went to a big house the door was open. I saw a gun on the table. I wondered why it was there. Then the phone started ringing. I saw the blood coming from the stairs. I said to myself, “OH MY GOODNESS!!!” I went up to the toilet, and in the toilet was a shoe with lots of blood. Then Iwent to the garden and I saw A DEAD DOG. I ran away and phoned police.
December 14th, 2007
I was almost asleep when I heard a loud bang from next door. So I went next door and saw the door broken so I pushed it aside and walked in. As I helped myself in, a phone was ringing I looked everywhere but sooner I found it I picked it up ane somebody said ”You better watch out because I’m coming for you.” After the phone call I was pretty scared. I saw blood on knives on the kitchen floor . And then I saw a lot of blood leading up the stairs. There were millons of make up lying everywhere. I always thought the Simpsons was clean. Margrets ice-skates and dancing costumes were hanging over the bannister. I noticed that Susie’s photo album was smashed. At the top of the stairs there was a dead dog. Blood was leading up into the bedroom and there was the simpsons lying on the ground.
byJamie
finshed
December 14th, 2007
One day there was a lady called Tracy who was told to go and look after a house because that was her job. The house was big and brown. When she arrived the house was a mess. There was rabbit food lying around. Plus there were two rabbits in a big cage but the rabbits were crying because all of the food was outside of the cage and the cage was locked.
Then Tracy found a diary that said that the petsitter was supposed to be here last month because the owner of the house was away on holiday, thats why Tracy had to come. Tracy saw the locked cage and the rabbits inside it so she went and bought a new cage that had no lock and gave the rabbits some food and cleaned up the house too but when Tracy was cleaning up she found a receipt that shows you that the rabbits are not real because they were toys. Then she read over the diary again and Tracy noticed that the owner was not really on holiday.
Hope
December 14th, 2007
It was the 3th November. I saw a house that looked strange. I went into the house. I saw the tv was on. I saw food and clothes all around the floor. I saw photos on the wall. I saw art materal on the table. I saw the phone on the ground. I heard a noise so I went up the stairs and went to the bedroom. I heard the alarm clock was on and the beds were not made. I saw a diary that was open and it said: “Going on holiday 3 November.” So I went outside. I saw car marks on the driveway; it looked like the rubber burnt. They must have be in a hurry.
megan
December 14th, 2007
It was Friday the 30th of November 2007. It was snowing. I walked into a large house which was messy but clean. Their stereo was blaring the song ”keep bleeding love” it was getting on my last nerve! So I got a hammer and smashed it to pieces. And it blew up but the house didn’t catch fire (luckily). I looked around the house, it was massive. There was a plasma tv in every room including the bathroom.
I walked up the stairs, there were glittery dancing costumes everywhere, a selection of colours. I took some of them. The costumes led me to a room, I walked in. It was a MESS! Make-up, shoes, clothes,costumes, glitter and cds everywhere. I mean it was a mess but I was in my element. I took the lot.
I ran out that room and went in the next room. It said on the door ”Award Room” . My mouth dropped to my knees. It was full of trophies,certificates and medals, I took some of them too. I went to the next room. I think it was an adult’s room, because there were beer cans and fags all over the place. I didn’t like that room. So I went to the next room. It was full of exercising equipment. I just took a big pink ball and I smashed the room to bits. I went to the last room it said on the door ”Gallery”. I went in, it was full of pictures and paintings and it had chairs and things in it. But one picture caught my eye. It was a baby. It looked like she was laughing. Before I left I smashed the sink and the bathroom flooded. Serve them right! That’s what they get for stealing my things. Ha! Ha!
by Leah
December 14th, 2007
