A CHRISTMAS UN-CAROL
October 10th, 2007
In a small cottage off the edge of the city there was smoke rising from the chimney.Suddenly the silence was broken by a scream and the slam of a door. I thought something suspicious was going on so I decided to investigate.
In the hall lay a football,a tennis racket and,standing tall,a cupboard.I went into the living room and on a pink, fluffy, carpet there was stuff which looked like cochineal on it and it was also on a christmas tree star. I heard a scream agian but this time coming from the kitchen. I went into the kitchen.
In the kitchen I saw a baseball bat with a dent. Suddenly there was a thump in the cupboard which I passed earlier. I opened the cupboard.
TO BE CONTINUED!
By Kaigen
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4 Comments Add your own
1. rudolph | October 11th, 2007 at 2:10 pm
i think it was brilliant because of a lot of interesting words.
2. Mum | October 13th, 2007 at 9:14 pm
Great work Kaigen, very imaginative but watch your spelling!!
3. Woodside | October 26th, 2007 at 3:21 pm
Thats good lots of Primary 6 and seven children will love it
4. Donbank | November 2nd, 2007 at 2:17 pm
It was good liam
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