A Hermit
November 21st, 2007
Today I discovered a little hut next to a waterfall. I really wanted to know who lives there. I looked through the window but nobody was there. I tried the door. It was open. I went in and looked around. There was a picture on a dartboard with darts thrown into it. There was a dog bowl that said ‘Rocky’. On the door outside it says, ‘Keep Out!’
I looked in all the rooms, there was only one bedroom with a single bed. There were drawings in one of the rooms that said ‘I HATE OTHER PEOPLE!’ It looked like a lonely little place with only 1 bowl, 1 cup and 1 set of cutlery. I was wondering, ‘Who is this guy?’
I called the police, and they finally came. I said, ‘This house is deserted. Can you look for anybody with a dog?’
The looked and looked but they couldn’t find this person.
by luke and liam
Entry Filed under: Schools, St Machar Primary
2 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 21st, 2007 at 9:11 pm
I thought your description of the hut was very detailed and interesting. But what has happened to the person - someone who lives alone - where has he vanished to? Write more please!
2. silver snake | February 14th, 2008 at 2:57 pm
Luke this is Robbie here this a really good story! I enjoyed it!
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