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A House in a Forest

September 19th, 2007

What sort of person lives in this house, and what are they finding a problem?

Arrived at a damp, crooked house in the middle of a dark, spooky, scary forest where the thunder struck and the owls hooted. I was trying to find a way in the house and to my surprise the door swung open. I approached the door slowly and nervously.

When I got in I went as white as a ghost as in the living room there were testubes. Some had frog liver and slug slime; some had people’s eyeballs and dragon intestine. At the corner of the room there was an old, crooked broomstick, and a book. It said Flying a Broomstick for Dummies. On top of the fireplace, on a shelf were black and white pictures.

In the kitchen was a large, black cauldren and beside it was a cooking book. Something was different about this cooking book but I couldn’t put my finger on it, then I realised what it was. The title said how to cook rotten frog. By this time I was nearly sick.

I went into the bedroom. It had piles of clothes, the bed was untidy and it had a smell of mothballs. Well at least it doesn’t have anything sick I said the myself.

It was late at night and I was going to the toilet when I heard a laughing noise, so I scampered away from the damp, spooky, scary house and went home.

Justin. Causewayend School

Entry Filed under: Causewayend, Writer in Residence, Writing

4 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Jenny  |  September 19th, 2007 at 2:10 pm

    I like the way Justin has given his story some humour. A nice idea the one about Broomstick Flying for Dummies, because it immediately conjures up a picture of what the person who lives in this house is really like. And the way the idea of cooking rotten frog makes him feel sick, also added a bit of humour. I thought this writing had good imagery.
    David

  • 2. Pato-primo  |  September 28th, 2007 at 10:32 pm

    Awesome story!

    Que bueno tu cuento Justin, eres todo un artista.
    Se te extraña aca en Chile.Este verano ire a Serena a ver a la abuela ojala ahi puedas ir. Saludos a tu papa.
    bye,!

    See you soon!! greetings from Concepcion, Chile. =P

  • 3. joseph and dylan  |  October 8th, 2007 at 10:12 am

    it is very good

  • 4. Mirshad and Conor  |  October 8th, 2007 at 10:17 am

    Cool story Justin! I like the “Flying broomsticks for dummies”. Cool describing words. You made the story have a cool bit of humour aswell!

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