A House in a Forest
September 19th, 2007
What sort of person lives in this house, and what are they finding a problem?
Arrived at a damp, crooked house in the middle of a dark, spooky, scary forest where the thunder struck and the owls hooted. I was trying to find a way in the house and to my surprise the door swung open. I approached the door slowly and nervously.
When I got in I went as white as a ghost as in the living room there were testubes. Some had frog liver and slug slime; some had people’s eyeballs and dragon intestine. At the corner of the room there was an old, crooked broomstick, and a book. It said Flying a Broomstick for Dummies. On top of the fireplace, on a shelf were black and white pictures.
In the kitchen was a large, black cauldren and beside it was a cooking book. Something was different about this cooking book but I couldn’t put my finger on it, then I realised what it was. The title said how to cook rotten frog. By this time I was nearly sick.
I went into the bedroom. It had piles of clothes, the bed was untidy and it had a smell of mothballs. Well at least it doesn’t have anything sick I said the myself.
It was late at night and I was going to the toilet when I heard a laughing noise, so I scampered away from the damp, spooky, scary house and went home.
Justin. Causewayend School
Entry Filed under: Causewayend, Writer in Residence, Writing






4 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | September 19th, 2007 at 2:10 pm
I like the way Justin has given his story some humour. A nice idea the one about Broomstick Flying for Dummies, because it immediately conjures up a picture of what the person who lives in this house is really like. And the way the idea of cooking rotten frog makes him feel sick, also added a bit of humour. I thought this writing had good imagery.
David
2. Pato-primo | September 28th, 2007 at 10:32 pm
Awesome story!
Que bueno tu cuento Justin, eres todo un artista.
Se te extraña aca en Chile.Este verano ire a Serena a ver a la abuela ojala ahi puedas ir. Saludos a tu papa.
bye,!
See you soon!! greetings from Concepcion, Chile. =P
3. joseph and dylan | October 8th, 2007 at 10:12 am
it is very good
4. Mirshad and Conor | October 8th, 2007 at 10:17 am
Cool story Justin! I like the “Flying broomsticks for dummies”. Cool describing words. You made the story have a cool bit of humour aswell!
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