Abandoned
December 11th, 2007
I was wallking home from school and I was late for tea. I saw a dark allyway and I knew that it was a shortcut to my street. When I was about half way down I saw an abandond house and not thinking about my tea I wallked in. There was blood splattered all across the wall and floor. The T.V. looked like it was a black and white T.V. The sofa was old and dusty.
The garden was full of weeds and its pond was dry and there were no plants whatsoever . In the kitchen there was no electricity apart from the cooker and the washing macine.
There was a noise upstairs and a voice. I stumbled up the stairs and there were four rooms one bathroom and three bedrooms. One of the bedrooms looked like it was just made and the other rooms looked like the rest of the house, old and damp. Then…
Stefan






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1. Jenny | December 12th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Some great descriptions that set the scene well. One very recently decorated bedroom and the rest of the house very uncared for - what is going on in this house - write more so I can find out!
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