ABANDONED BOAT
November 21st, 2007
I don’t know why I had to be called out to this, but I had to take the boat over. I moaned. I saw lots of big windows. I ran through to the middle section because I heard kind of whirring noise, like a helicopter taking off, I thought. We explored the interior during the search and I found two large mark 2 missile launchers. I searched the hull and found a large crate. I ordered someone to carefully break it open. It was a Lamdorghini. We also found plenty of ammunition but no guns. I muttered. Next I sat on a chair, then it sudenly rose upwards. I put a tape in the arm of the chair. A large screen projector came down and the movie started to play. I saw a small hatch. I stopped the movie and opened it. I found a badge saying licence to kill.
Daniel
2 Comments Add your own
1. Russell | November 29th, 2007 at 12:52 am
Are you Daniel Craig? This Abandoned Boat scene, involving a flash car and high spec weaponry, seems straight out of a 007 movie. I reckon some nasty villains had to escape from their boat in a hurry, taking their guns but leaving their ammo behind.
I think you could make a fine thriller writer, Daniel.
2. Cornhill | November 29th, 2007 at 4:00 pm
hiya it hollie in your class i love your story its great!
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