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• 1. Russell  |  November 10th, 2006 at 12:25 pm

  There’s a lot of interesting things about this poem: the different heights of the lines, the autumnal colours… you could almost miss that it’s an acrostic.

  And to my ears ‘Trees leaves fall off‘ sounds just like leaves trembling and then fluttering away.

• 2. Jenny  |  November 12th, 2006 at 11:26 am

  Enjoyed your poem very much and it was great having you on the Reading Bus. We really enjoyed our time at Cornhill - all the classes were superb and we look forward to coming back next term.

• 3. Jamie  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:24 am

  I thought it was very clever and colourful for p.3s and there were no mistakes.

• 4. Juuso  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:24 am

  I liked the acrostic lettering and the colour and brilliant spelling.

• 5. Hannah  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:24 am

  I think it was fantastic, it was beautiful. I loved the colours and the size of each line the way they got bigger. I also liked the fact that you spelt Autumn with the first letters of each line. Well Done!

• 6. Lewis  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:25 am

  Enjoyed story very disciutive .and very acrostic .

• 7. Rema  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:26 am

  I enjoyed the poem. It is very nice.

• 8. Jade  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:27 am

  It was really smart the way you spelt Autumn with the first letter of each line. Well done.

• 9. rikki  |  November 20th, 2006 at 2:28 am

  I like your poem.Your primery 3 class must be smart.

• 10. jordan slater  |  January 16th, 2007 at 7:33 pm

  the poem is good i liked the bit about trees leaves fall off in autumn.

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