Blood Van
October 11th, 2007
What was in the cupboard?
When I went to the park, I saw a caravan. It was empty. There were footprints on the ground near it. I went inside. It was dark there were 2 beds. I couldn’t see any photos but there were 3 shelves of books and a map.
There was blood in the bathroom but there was no body in the caravan. I looked all over the place
I want back out side and I followed the footprints. They lead to a shed but I stopped because my mind told me to look in the cupboard in the caravan. So I went back inside .
I looked in the cupboard and there was a gun and it was still hot. I heard someone crying but it’s just the TV. On the windows was a fingerprint. It was red. I went outside and I checked on the engine. It was hot too
I went back inside and the mobile had three messages on it. It was not long before I heard a knock. I looked out of the window to see who it was. It was just three children.
I went to look in the bike carrier which was at the back of the caravan. I found blood. I turned on the light – but it wasn’t working.
I smelled something burning…..
by Shalin, St Peter’s RC School
Entry Filed under: Schools, St Peter's RC
3 Comments Add your own
1. Donbank | November 2nd, 2007 at 2:17 pm
very good story pretty much blood
2. Academy | November 21st, 2007 at 12:30 pm
Hi Shalin
It’s Emy I liked your story!
Keep up the good work
3. Mrs Martin | November 25th, 2007 at 10:26 pm
This is a scary story Shalin. There are a lot of clues but I am not sure why there was a hot gun in the cupboard. It seems as if a crime has been committed and you are describing the scene very well.
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