Burning Down
December 11th, 2007
I was walking into my friends house I smelt a burning smell. As I walked in I saw a set of golf clubs lying against the wall. I could still smell a horrible burning smell, I went upstairs to see if the smell was coming from up there.
I went into my friends room and I saw a celtic football strip there was also a psp and a ps3 also a wii and a ds beside them there was a masive plasma t.v. I wanted to have a shot of the wii so I put the t.v on but it would not go on. Strange I thought so I just left it. I could tell the smell was not coming from there. So I went into the room next door in that room there was another plasma t.v and there was a masive king size bed. The smell was definitly not from there so I went back down stairs. I could smell it really bad as i was going down the stairs. As I turned into the hallway I saw that the carpet was black and the smell was worse that it had ever been.
I walked into the room at the bottom of the living room I think it was the kitchen but I really could not tell because everything was burnt and there was glass all over the floor. As I walked through the glass I noticed a lighter. Did the person who set the fire drop it?
Morven






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1. Jenny | December 12th, 2007 at 7:56 pm
There is a lot of details in your story which is great and means I can imagine the house. I’m not sure what happened though - who set the fire th the carpet and why? Write more so I can find out.
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