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November 2nd, 2007

Who do you think lives in this caravan?

There was a Caravan City by the river.  One of the caravans stood out.  It had two bedrooms and was surounded by gardens.  The caravan was for a family of three people.  It was long and narrow and coloured white.

The inside was cream colour and there were red spots.  When I opened the green front door, I saw some bits of coloured paper.  I went to the living room and on the table I saw a tape and scissors.  On the floor were bits of wrapping paper.  There was a sticky label on the kitchen table.  The floor was all dirty.  A bottle was lying on the table and the water covered the floor.

 In the frst bedroom there was a football lying on the floor.  On the bed there was an invitation to the party that night.  There was a jacket and a scarf on the bed and in the bedroom there was a photo of the family.

In the bathroom, the sink was all dirty and there was no soap.  There was no bath top in it - it only had a shower.  The bathroom was painted blue.  The window was opened.  the weather outside was windy and cloudy.

By Jasmine

Entry Filed under: Schools, St Peter's RC, Writer in Residence, Writing

2 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Russell  |  November 2nd, 2007 at 2:34 pm

    I’m intrigued about the caravan you describe, Jasmine. The invitation to the party, wrapping paper, and sticky label make me think the family might be at a birthday party. And maybe they left in a hurry, leaving the window open.

    It seems they don’t look after the caravan as well as they should with dirty floors, spilt bottles and they don’t even have soap.

    I think I need more clues to work out who lives in the caravan. Unless I’m just missing some.

  • 2. Mrs Martin  |  November 25th, 2007 at 9:41 pm

    Well done Jasmine. I enjoyed your description of the caravan. I wonder whether footballers have rushed in to get ready for a party and gone away in a hurry.

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