Caravan City
November 2nd, 2007
Who do you think lives in this caravan?
There was a Caravan City by the river. One of the caravans stood out. It had two bedrooms and was surounded by gardens. The caravan was for a family of three people. It was long and narrow and coloured white.
The inside was cream colour and there were red spots. When I opened the green front door, I saw some bits of coloured paper. I went to the living room and on the table I saw a tape and scissors. On the floor were bits of wrapping paper. There was a sticky label on the kitchen table. The floor was all dirty. A bottle was lying on the table and the water covered the floor.
In the frst bedroom there was a football lying on the floor. On the bed there was an invitation to the party that night. There was a jacket and a scarf on the bed and in the bedroom there was a photo of the family.
In the bathroom, the sink was all dirty and there was no soap. There was no bath top in it - it only had a shower. The bathroom was painted blue. The window was opened. the weather outside was windy and cloudy.
By Jasmine
Entry Filed under: Schools, St Peter's RC, Writer in Residence, Writing






2 Comments Add your own
1. Russell | November 2nd, 2007 at 2:34 pm
I’m intrigued about the caravan you describe, Jasmine. The invitation to the party, wrapping paper, and sticky label make me think the family might be at a birthday party. And maybe they left in a hurry, leaving the window open.
It seems they don’t look after the caravan as well as they should with dirty floors, spilt bottles and they don’t even have soap.
I think I need more clues to work out who lives in the caravan. Unless I’m just missing some.
2. Mrs Martin | November 25th, 2007 at 9:41 pm
Well done Jasmine. I enjoyed your description of the caravan. I wonder whether footballers have rushed in to get ready for a party and gone away in a hurry.
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