Cornhill
One sunny day the mansion was very hot; hot as the sun. I smashed the door in and walked slowly into the bedroom. I saw a flat screen tv on the floor all in pieces. I went though to the gamesroom and kicked the leg of the pool table and it broke. A gun fell out to the ground. I decided to investigate further. In the next room I saw that it had been totally trashed. In the far corner on the bedside cabinet lay an Aberdeen football season ticket dated for today.The time on the ticket was 3pm but it was now 5pm. What could have happened here?
DANIEL
November 21st, 2007
Manchester Mansion is all posh. It is usually filled with happiness and smiles. Today it was dull and empty. No one was around. I walked into the livingroom. There was glass on the floor, water spilled all over. The room smelt like horse radish. I left the living room when I heard a creek. As I was away to walk into the kitchen I heard a whimper, so I ran straight into the kitchen. There was a black glove left lying on the the floor, along with thick muddy footprints. I followed the foot prints to the back door, but they faded into nowhere. A knife with red stains, and a string of black hair was left lying on the microwave.
Whoever came to the Brady’s family house had trashed the place. Something happened that day. I classified the Brady family as MISSING!!.
Alix
November 21st, 2007
I was driving round west Liverpool when I heard a miaow and a crash from an upstairs flat. When I went in I saw some size 4 football boots and a big brown jacket. I knew they couldn’t belong to the same person because of the sizes. I walked into the kitchen and saw a newspaper report with the title “Blue or Red?” On the wall there were Everton posters above a small T.V. on standby. A broken vase lay on the floor in the hall and there were scratches on the door, so I knew they had a pet cat. On the mantlepiece I saw football trophies and a football lay on the floor. I decided that I should leave as it wasn’t my property, so I quickly walked back to my car.
Jamie
November 21st, 2007
As I walked past the dark cosy cottage, the old rusty door was wide open. I crept into the cottage, I saw a pair of pink Barbie slippers and a pair of fluffy beige slippers. I could smell dog flea spray. I walked into a cluttered lilac room with a pair of roller blades lying on the floor. The bed had loads of Barbies scattered all over. On the oak bedside table was a black and white picture of a happy couple on their wedding day. The shiny frame was decorated with pink love hearts all over. I tiptoed into a small tidy room. I could smell the lavender plug in airfreshner. The cream bedding had no creases at all in it. The matching curtains were neatly clipped back and there was a fleecy dressing gown lying over the beach wooden chair. I scurried through to the kitchen. There were two mugs half full with tea. The date on the calendar was the 13th. On the notice board there was a note from the post office saying “To be picked up on the 3rd”.
Chloe
November 21st, 2007
I was driving down a country road when I saw an old motor home and pulled over to see it. The door was wide open so I walked in. It smelt of cheap wine and stale beer.
I looked to the right and saw there were smashed wine bottles and lots of blood. I heard a weird noise coming from the toilet. There was screaming. There was a click - the sound of a cassette tape being chewed up. I looked to my left and noticed the TV, CD player and football trophies had been stolen. There was one left; it was a maths trophy. There was a pair of rubber gloves which were covered in blood.
I dashed back outside. My new shiny Red Vauxhall Corsa had been stolen and there were tyre marks leading back to Aberdeen.
Liam
Cornhill Primary School
November 21st, 2007
The home help pushed open the glass caravan door as hard as he could, but he was worried he’d break the cracked glass. He went in but the place was empty, as empty as a cave. He noticed on the dusty floor leaving foot prints. He opened a cupboard and a moth flew out. All he saw was a set of fishing rods. A set of false teeth in a glass in the bathroom….
Dean
November 21st, 2007
It was a dark cold night. As I walked in the small cottage door, I saw that it was a poor house but there were lottery tickets ripped up. There was also one on the table with the winning ticket on the back of it. On the table I also saw a catalogue of homes. The title was “Homes for You”. I heard a loud noise saying “YOU HAVE WON £2000.” I noticed it was the small t.v. in the corner on channel 1.
I smelt men’s deodorant all around the room.There was also an Aberdeen football calendar on the wall, saying Saturday 3rd November 2007, with a picture of Scott Sevrin. Beside the picture was a little football iron board still out.
On a little chair there was men’s gel and scratch cards scattered. I saw on the wall that there was an Aberdeen Football border with a little man. The deodorant became stronger and stronger. I noticed it was coming from upstairs so I went there to find out where the smell was coming from.
It was upstairs in the bathroom. As I went into the bathroom. I knew it was coming from outside in the front garden, and out of the garden.
Kirstin
November 21st, 2007
It was a dark and dingy day. The house was very expensive and the door was wide open. The detective had been called out for a murder investigation. He went into the house and the first thing he saw was a picture of a happy family. The detective looked around and then heard a noise. He turned back around and the picture was no longer there. The detective thought nothing of it and carried on his search. He went into the main living area; there was a trail of blood leading up to the stairs. The detective went up the stairs and came to a point where the blood stopped. He looked in all the bedrooms but nothing was there. So he decided to report back to headquarters - until he noticed something on his foot. It was note that read help. Then the detective fell down and was dead.
Kieran
November 21st, 2007
I don’t know why I had to be called out to this, but I had to take the boat over. I moaned. I saw lots of big windows. I ran through to the middle section because I heard kind of whirring noise, like a helicopter taking off, I thought. We explored the interior during the search and I found two large mark 2 missile launchers. I searched the hull and found a large crate. I ordered someone to carefully break it open. It was a Lamdorghini. We also found plenty of ammunition but no guns. I muttered. Next I sat on a chair, then it sudenly rose upwards. I put a tape in the arm of the chair. A large screen projector came down and the movie started to play. I saw a small hatch. I stopped the movie and opened it. I found a badge saying licence to kill.
Daniel
November 21st, 2007
It was a windy dark night and all the leaves were falling off the trees. It was halloween night! There was a big house on the corner of the street and there was a large pumpkin sitting on the window sill. The bright red door was wide open and there was a few kids hanging around outside the garden. There were decorations out side the house. The window was also smashed with little bits of glass everywhere. There was a spiderweb in the corner of the room. A knife was covered in blood lying outside in the garden on the bright green grass. There was a flat football lying on the floor and there were drops of blood on the floor. There was a very dusty trophy on the shelf. There was an empty sweet bowl lying on the path outside in the garden.
Melissa
November 21st, 2007
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