Cornhill
The living room was an enormous cold room with a big television and pictures of sombody with medals and trophies in their hands on the wall. There was a big cabinet full of trophies and there was a huge brown leather couch in the corner beside a small blue lamp. The walls were light brown and the curtains were very long.
Through in the kitchen there was a massive dinner table with four plates on the table. Two forks and knives and one spoon next to each of the plates. There was a vase with fake flowers in it in the middle of the table. The kitchen was tidy and clean. There was nothing that could be tidied. Upstairs in one of the bedrooms there was a king sized bed with a little box filled with wedding photos. The room had a set of drawers. There were three tiny ornaments on the top of them. In the smallest bedroom there was a pink television, a pink set of drawers and a big pink net hanging from the roof to the floor - it was sitting over the small bed. There were two small purple fluffy bears on the bed.
There was one more bedroom. This room was a little bigger than the other room. Nearly everything was blue on the wall and there was a big board covered in certificates and a box on the floor full with medals and trophies. There was a football and a golf set in the corner.
Erynn
November 21st, 2007
One day I was driving along when I saw this super house. I went to see who was in it. I tried to open the door but the door knob was hot. He had a big garden, three cars, a long driveway and a shed. I then opened the front door. I smelt something up in the loft so I opened the hatch and I saw an orange light, so I went down and phoned the fire brigade and I saw a lots of trophies and it says Celtic football club and a Celtic top and the first letter says S and the last letter is M and the rest had faded away.
Then the fire was worse. The person was not in at the time his car was not there then the fire brigade came.
by Dylan
November 21st, 2007
It was a dark and stormy night and the wind was whistling through the trees. A haunted house was sitting in the middle of nowhere. The door was hanging off by one hinge and lots of needles were lying on the ground with cobwebs everywhere. All the windows were boarded up exept from one that had a bloody handprint on it. There was a bat mobile sitting in the driveway with its lights on. Bats were flying everywhere with screaching voices. There was a poor man who lived there he had long black hair with maggots in it! I got nearer the door when I heard screaming.
I walked up the long path and opened the door, tiptoed through to the kitchen and saw hand carved pumpkins hanging from the ceiling also with scary streamers which spelled out halloween. The microwave had lots of blood in it which I thought was awfully weird. I looked out the window and saw a rusty old shed with all of its windows smashed! There had been a rumour going around that zombies lived there. SPOOKY paintings were hanging from the wall with eyes that followed you! I slowly walked into the livingroom.
By Lee
finished
November 21st, 2007
It was a windy and thundery night. There was a bright red Ferrari outside and the driveway was made from pink granite. There was an expensive mansion right behind the driveway. I walked up to the door and noticed that the lock was wonky and had dents on the handle. There was a hammer lying on the ground. The door was half open and I went in. The hall was very big with brightly coloured walls and a table with a very expensive vase on top.
I went into another room. It was the kitchen, and it was very big and had a very large space. The fridge-freezer was on the wall next to the sink. There was a big double oven and a table in the middle.There was a business card with contact details on it and there was also a letter turned upside down. I turned it over and it read ”Hi partner, I really hate you for what you did yesterday, not selling the business for 43 million pounds . I HATE YOU. I don’t want to talk to you ever again.” I put the letter down and walked to the door opposite the table.
It looked like the living room. It was the living room. The sofa was very large and made from leather. There was a plasma screen TV in front of the sofa. There was a big glass coffee table to the rght and to the left there was a staircase.
Up the staircase was a trail of blood that started at the foot of the stairs and went into a room at the end of the landing. I opened the door and saw a black bed with the the curtains closed. I opened the curtains and saw the blood going under the bed.
Tonitia
Cornhill Primary School
November 21st, 2007
It was a damp,bleak day.The mansion up ahead was engulfed in dark,gloomy storm clouds.Every few minutes you could hear a flash of lightning strike the enormous building.
As you went into the living room you could see cobwebs in every corner of the mysterious room. On the living room table in the centre of the room there was a radio playing the top 10 hits.
Then all of a sudden the radio’s music changed into a really creepy song as if my magic. Also on the table there were bags filled to the top with sweets.
In the kichen there were lots of pictures of families dressed up in lots of different costumes,all looking happy except for one. One that picture was the year 2006, last year.
Whilst you went upstairs the stairs creaked when you took a step forward.On the wall of the lobby there was a note saying I’m out with mates be back at midnight love Janet.
When you go into the bedroom the door creaks open. In the bedroom all of the light were flickering suspiciously. All across the floor toys were scattered as if nobody wanted you to come in. On the bed there were joke books with pages ripped out.
In the downstairs library books were everywhere,on the table,on the desks, even all over the floor. On each table there were candles burning brightly. Then suddenly they all went out. Leaving the room in terrifying darkness!
Ashleigh
November 21st, 2007
It was a dark and rainy night. As I walked up to the door there was wood and glass scattered everywhere. Above the door there was a smashed burlglar alarm. As I entered the house trying not to step on the glass there was a small draught in the livingroom as I walked into it. There was a glass table that was smashed up. Beside the glass there was a small kitchen knife with blood on it. As I walked through to the kitchen the fridge door was wide open and there was a broken chair. There was an empty purse on the floor.
Beside the kitchen sink there was a black balaclava. As I went up the stairs into one of the bedrooms there was a cracked photo frame of a man and woman. There was no matress on the bed but there were crumpled bed covers on the floor. There was also a smashed window. I went to look out the window and there was the matress.
Hannah
November 21st, 2007
It was a sunny day and I was driving down the road in my new car and I came across a funny looking house. It had a broken window and all the tyres on the car were flat. I walked up the swirly path to the doorstep and and I opened the door.
It took me straight into the lobby. It was long and wide. I walked into the livingroom and there was a big football bean bag. I went through to the Kitchen and there were lots of pasta and salads in the cupoard there was there was a letter in the table wich said ”Are you ready for the big game tommorow against Athletico Madrid? From your Manager J.C.”
I walked up stairs to a bedroom and in the cupboard there were lots of blue football kits that had the number one on it. I came out of the house and walked down the path and to my car and drove away.
Liam
November 21st, 2007
It was a damp cold day. I was walking along the street when I came across an expensive looking house. The door was open and the window was smashed with a chandelier shining through.
I couldn`t hear anyone in the house, so I decided to go in. In the hallway there was a flat black football and a pair of ice skates with only one had a blade on it. As I walked along I got to the kitchen. There was an empty bottle of juice on the shelf and the fridge was empty.
Then I walked into the living room. On the table there was a half filled glass of wine. I looked around and saw a smashed photo frame on the ground. It was a wedding photo and the husband was wearing football boots. There were balloons on the wall and some were popped on the clean brown carpet. There was an anniversary card and present on the cream sofa. Beside the card was a house phone with a message on it. The message said, “I am sorry can you forgive me?”
I started to leave. When I walked past the television set there were ripped flowers behind it. I decided to leave but when I walked past the stairs there were muddy footsteps going up them.
Narelle
November 21st, 2007
It was a bright sunny day and I was about to go and visit my friend in the flat near my house, but on the third floor I saw the door on the left hand-side of me wide open with the hinges broken off. I walked up to the door and peeked inside. I could see a smashed light bulb on the floor and a football sat in one corner of the lobby.
I walked into the living room and looked around the door again to make sure nobody was there. In the room I could see a big screen tv in the bottom right hand corner of the room. It was turned on but no sound came from it. The window in front of me was smashed but there was no glass on the floor so I looked out the window and I could just see little bits of glass in the grass. I turned around and looked at the wall where a wedding photo hung. Beside the photo there was a huge trophy case filled with silver ice skating trophies and medals with the name Sasha Cohen on all of them.
I looked around again and I could see a notebook with writing for a holiday on the black, leather sofa. Then I heard a banging sound coming from the lobby so I went back into the lobby and I listened again for the banging. The noise got louder everytime I took a step and I saw where the noise was coming from. It was coming from a closet. I took little baby steps because I was getting really scared but then the noise stopped when I stood in front of the closet. I then suddenly turned the handle, opened the door and then I VANISHED ! Dun Dun Dun
By Caitlin
November 21st, 2007
As I walked towards the house I saw that the door was open. I walked into the house and saw lots of shattered glass on the floor. I walked a bit further into the house and saw wine spilt on the floor and a candle with wax dripping onto the floor. There was a big table in the middle of the room with lots of wedding cards on it.
There were also lots of wedding photos and banners. The banners said congratulations. I heard a noise so I ran through to the kitchen panicking. It was the t.v. I was invited here but no-one was in. I could not bear it if the people in this house got hurt! In the kitchen there was a chopping board with lots of vegetables on it. Beside the vegetables there was a knife and an empty bottle of tomato ketchup. There were balloons on the kitchen floor and some were burst. There was a dress on the floor alongside a shirt and tie. There were a pair of heels with one heel broken. There was a message on the answering machine saying “Truly sorry I can’t make it. Speak to you soon though.”
There were footprints going two ways out the house. I followed them but they went into the garden then disappeared.
Hollie
November 21st, 2007
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