St Machar Primary
It was a quiet Wednesday night, it was dark and very calm on the water. A big blue boat was tied up at the harbour.
On board there was a sailor called Bobby and his 4 dogs. Bobby was thin and tall. he had grey hair and brown eyes. he was eighty years old. He had a long grey beard. He neeed some food as he was very hungry. He waited for the number 18 bus. The bus did not come. Bobby looked up to the sky. It had started to snow. He felt very cold. What should he do now?
By Taylor
November 21st, 2007
One night I heard owls. The owls were hooting in the trees. Felipe went to the ice skating park in his car. It was cancelled because it was raining heavy. He was grumpy and sad because it was cancelled. He went to his car, it would not start. He was about to walk away when an owl hooted very loudly. Felipe screamed and ran all the way home.
by Victoria
November 21st, 2007
Late one November, it was snowing heavily. A caravan site near Stonehaven was buried in snow.
Artificial flowers hung from a hook attached to an expensive caravan. It was a very well kept caravan and red curtains were blowing from an open window. The door was wide open. In the living room there was a purple sofa bed. Opposite it there was a table with food half eaten on it. There were pictures of a woman and a child beside the window which had a shelf next to it.
In the kitchen the wooden floor was white oak. In the sink were plates and cutlery which were unwashed. The oven hid behind the skirting board. Next to that were a blue cupboard and drawer. There was a dirty mop in a corner.
A bedroom was decorated in different kinds of pinks. In one corner there was an unmade bed.Opposite that was a picture of a little girl. Homework lay scattered on the cream coloured carpet and clothes lay in a pile
In the another bedroom there were drawers, and one of the drawers was open, clothes hung out of it. The bed was a mess. On top of the drawers there was a jewellery box. A few items were missing.
On the bed lay a newspaper which said:”WATCH OUT,BURGLARS ABOUT!”
by Amy and Kimeya
November 21st, 2007
One midnight there was a king he lived in a mansion the big hot tub was gold. The king was chinese. He was asleep. He heard a crack of broken glass. The king ran away. The mansion was Haunted.
Felipe
November 21st, 2007
Today I discovered a little hut next to a waterfall. I really wanted to know who lives there. I looked through the window but nobody was there. I tried the door. It was open. I went in and looked around. There was a picture on a dartboard with darts thrown into it. There was a dog bowl that said ‘Rocky’. On the door outside it says, ‘Keep Out!’
I looked in all the rooms, there was only one bedroom with a single bed. There were drawings in one of the rooms that said ‘I HATE OTHER PEOPLE!’ It looked like a lonely little place with only 1 bowl, 1 cup and 1 set of cutlery. I was wondering, ‘Who is this guy?’
I called the police, and they finally came. I said, ‘This house is deserted. Can you look for anybody with a dog?’
The looked and looked but they couldn’t find this person.
by luke and liam
November 21st, 2007
One bleak winter day on a caravan site, in the corner stood a dull caravan. The owner of the caravan park was going about the usual business of the morning site inspection when he came to the dull caravan. He went inside to look around. He went straight to the bedrooms, where he came across a muddy handprint on the door. There was a dent in the wall and the beds were not made. He had had enough of the bedrooms, so he went through to the kitchen/livingroom. There was a smashed beer bottle lying on the floor.
Guess what happened??
by Megan and Caitlin
November 21st, 2007
When I saw an old house I went into it. I saw a cat and I noticed it wasn’t moving. It was stuffed and when I walked into the living room I saw that a stereo was missing and the window was broken. I saw footprints on the window sill and a wheelchair.
by Dylan & Aaron
November 21st, 2007
Guess who lives here ?
The house cost well over £1000000. There were 5 bedrooms and 2 bathrooms, 1 kitchen and 1 living room.
In the living room there was a black sette and a black fire place and on it there was a vase of roses and congraulations cards.
In the middle of the living room there was a glass table on it was a book of wedding dresses on the front cover.
On the black and red what looked freshly painted walls was a photo of a lady and man on it hugging.
In the master bedroom there was a four poster bed and the quilt was so straight it looked like it was ironed and there was a dressing table with make-up, straightners, curlers and a hairdryer.
Across the room a bright ray of sunshine shone to reveal confetti lying on the ground.
by lauren duncan and danielle hunter
November 21st, 2007
I came to the house, the door was wide open. When I went in there was a golf club missing and when I went to the master bedroom I saw a missing trophy and the missing golf club with bits of blood on the golf stick with a trail leading to cupboard with a hand sticking out of it. When I went back down I saw a bit of The Sun written ‘DEAD’. When I went to the kitchen I saw a box. When I walked near it, I knew it was a bomb so I quickly escaped from the house and after few minutes the house blow up.
By Dylan & Sebastian
November 21st, 2007
One wet cold day I called at his bungalow in the forest but he wasn’t there. I noticed his wheelchair was very dusty but he must have taken his other one. The bungalow had not been painted for years and there were dusty books and trophies that he had since he was a teenager. It was snowing outside and I spotted some wheel tracks. I wondered where he was going. The man didn’t know how to cook but I thought I could smell something burning. I went into the kitchen to stop the fire spreading. I tried to call the fire brigade on my mobile but it was too late. I got out of the house.
By Sinan
November 21st, 2007
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