Sunnybank
As I walked through the town my phone started to ring, I answered it and it was my boss telling me to go to a house on the east side to find out if these people had something to do with the Black Market . I didn’t know why he chose me but I went anyway.
It was a small house in need of repair. The white paint on the walls was peeling and a rusty gate had broken off its hinges and lay across the path leading to the door. There was no number on the door. I rearched for the handle, tried to open it and discovered it was unlocked. Although I didn’t have a warrant, I risked it and went inside.
I wassurprised there was no one in, so I headed for the front room. I could see they didn’t really care about the house because wallpaper was peeling off the walls, the carpets were damp and dirty, and the room smelt musty and of stale ash. I could see hundreds of cigarette ends and empty whisky bottles scattered about the floor. On an old and worn coffee table there was a framed photograph of a man and a woman, with wine glasses in their hands, looking drunk, and both had dark rings under their eyes.
Also on the table there were ten piles of cash in fifty pound notes
There was an answer machine on a stand in the corner of the room. I clicked it on and listened to the message. “Have you got the goods yet? if you do meet me at the docks at two.”
I looked at my watch and could see that it was three o’clock. Suddenly the door opened and I knew I was in trouble. Deep trouble.
Elliot
December 11th, 2007
I was walking into my friends house I smelt a burning smell. As I walked in I saw a set of golf clubs lying against the wall. I could still smell a horrible burning smell, I went upstairs to see if the smell was coming from up there.
I went into my friends room and I saw a celtic football strip there was also a psp and a ps3 also a wii and a ds beside them there was a masive plasma t.v. I wanted to have a shot of the wii so I put the t.v on but it would not go on. Strange I thought so I just left it. I could tell the smell was not coming from there. So I went into the room next door in that room there was another plasma t.v and there was a masive king size bed. The smell was definitly not from there so I went back down stairs. I could smell it really bad as i was going down the stairs. As I turned into the hallway I saw that the carpet was black and the smell was worse that it had ever been.
I walked into the room at the bottom of the living room I think it was the kitchen but I really could not tell because everything was burnt and there was glass all over the floor. As I walked through the glass I noticed a lighter. Did the person who set the fire drop it?
Morven
December 11th, 2007
I had just walked out of school. School was over. On my way home, I saw a smelly caravan beside the Junk Yard. The caravan was black and brown and the door was pink. The door was open wide. I went inside and a rope fell down. I continued and I saw blood on the windows and on the smelly socks. There was a calender on the wall. I saw Chuckie curtains. I saw two daggers on the windowsill and a machine gun and a sliced up finger with a key in it. So I opened the closet door and a dead body fell out. The man came back. His name was Freddie. I picked up the machine gun and shot him…
Michael
December 11th, 2007
The Murderer was in his twenties. He was a teacher. The first day he came he was greeted by the headteacher who said welcome to the Sunnybank. I will take you a round the school. They walked around the school. They stopped at one class. The head teacher said that this is your new teacher for the rest of the term untill your teacher comes back. The headtecher said I will go back to the office. I will come back at lunchtime.
The new techer said hello to the class. They said hello back then he said we will do some maths today and do some handstands. The class said “That is fine.” Then someone said that the teacher said that you will have to come down to the office because you willl have to come now. The teacher said that if you get your work wrong you will have to wipe the school windows! All the class were shocked if they got their work was wrong. Then the teacher was back
by Kieranl
December 11th, 2007
Once upon a time there was a young couple, called Sharpay and Ryan. They both had busy lifestyles and very demanding jobs, Ryan was a dentist and Sharpay was a model. They hardly ever saw each other. So one night they both decided they would come home at a set time and spend the evening together. So they did that.
Ryan made a lovely meal and they enjoyed that together. Then Sharpay made a lovely trifle for dessert, and they both enjoyed that. Then they sat down on the couch and watched television. Later on they both started to suffer from flu-like symptoms, sore head and feeling sleepy. So Sharpay decided to go to bed and see if she felt better in the morning. But Ryan stayed up watching television.
In the morning when neither of them arrived at work thier friends called them but there was no answer. after work Ryan and Sharpay’s friends went to the house and their cars were still in the drive. Later on the police had to break in to the house. They found Ryan unconscious on the staircase and found Sharpay in her bed in a coma….
by Liam P7 Sunnybank school.
December 11th, 2007
As I walked by a posh neighbourhood. I noticed a house door was open with a smashed window. I thought I’d check it out I noticed a football lying on the floor with air coming out of it. As I walked along to the kitchen I saw a knife block and the biggest knife was missing. I started to panic. I am in a danger area. As I saw blood dripping from the fridge handle. I said to myself I should get out of here……………. AND QUICK
December 11th, 2007
I was walking home with my friend from school and we passed a farm. We have walked past this farm before but it seemed different today, we heard a long and loud SCREACH! We jumped. My friend walked slowly towards the door… I followed her. There was a drilling sound. I walked into the living room.
IT STANK! phew! There was a picture hanging on the wall. “1st prize,” it said. There was a picture of the farmer with a fat pig with a blue ribbion on it which was standing next to him. I shivered. My friend swapped the salt and pepper around. (They were shaped as two roosters.) I sighed. “Whats wrong”, she said? ^CRASH^ we jumped again, this time my friend shivered.
I walked further along the living room and out to the hall. Their was a wooden plaque with a bulls head on it. I screamed, my friend screamed. The door knob to a room was shaking. (The room with the noises!)
Jade
December 11th, 2007
As I woke up on Christmas morning my mother said ” Oooohhhh nooooo!” “What’s the matter?” I shouted. So I came running down stairs to see what had happened. The presents were missing; the tree was missing too. There was nothing but emptiness. There were pieces of wrapping paper all over the place and I found glass on the floor. I didn’t understand why there was glass on the floor but there was a trail of blood and glass on the floor comming into the kitchen.
As I opened the door suddenly there was my dad dressed up as a Santa with a very big red nose and he said …
Stevie
December 11th, 2007
I was walking home from work one day and I noticed a charred window on the bungalow nearby. I came up to the door and it creaked open. There was a slight burning smell and the walls were black. I moved through the house and I saw a calendar. I could vaguely read one section. First of May Rugby tour. That was yesterday. I saw an ashtray on the sofa and a half empty bottle of beer. I stumbled up the stair.
There was a room. I walked to the room and there were shelves full of medals and trophies. This room had been perfectly preserved from the fire. I carried on through the house and I came to a bedroom. I looked round and I saw an aerosol can and the room smelt deeply of deodorant. I looked out the window and saw tyre tracks in the drive. I came down the stairs and left.
Robert (Bobby)
December 11th, 2007
Listen to these great reports by pupils at Sunnybank Primary school, including interviews with the Head and Deputy Head teachers, and pupils involved in the
- Girls school
- Football team
- Chess club
- Drama club
Sunnybank Primary:
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September 17th, 2007
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