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The setting is very peaceful. Its a nice farm with lots of animals all eating grass. There are lots of trucks with really noisy engines. This cottage has a large grafito tag of a devil on the roof which also has blue and green paint on the walls below. The chimney is missing a few bricks and is very unstable. The windows are shattered by drum sticks and guitars which seem to be intact. The bathroom sink is broken in half and the toilet strangly enough is missing … The walls were in the colour red with the floor being bright orange. A window is open just a little crack. What a strange house.
Suddenly, a young boy looking round about the age of 14 came in from the blazing sun outside. He looked around the horrifying house and saw a large photo of a rocker playing his guitar. He was amused by the fancy clothes and the arrow shaped guitar which said on it,`Beware me.` In the kitchen, food was everywhere. What a strange house. Upstairs lay a black cat with claws as sharp as sharks teeth and a shirt, and on it saying,`ACDC.` What a strange house. Further on in the house was a bedroom that had bright yellow stools and on top of them lay some shiny tickets with the band the boy had always wanted to see. The boy snatched the tickets and ran out of the room. As he did he trampled over the cat and fell downstairs then with one final sprint the boy ran out of the house.
November 7th, 2007
One miserable day,detective Joe Cameron was having a drive in the country and passed a luxury cottage. But he thought there was something strange going on, so he drove up the dull drive and parked his car. He approached with caution and then he noticed a smashed window. There was also a smell of dead rat in the air.
Detective Joe Cameron entired the million pound cottage with care. He walked over the rammed down door and entered the kitchen first. The dective noticed that all the flowers and fruit had died and he smelt onion and garlic. He thought to himself that nobody had been there in a long time. The cottage was freezing, so the electricty had been turned off.
He entered the living room next and noticed there were blood stains all over the floor and sofa . The veranda door was wide open. The blood stains led out into the veranda and out into the garden. There was smashed glass all over the floor. The detective walked into the garden and spotted a gun in the grass. Then he noticed there were blood stains on shed door. So what happened ?
DON DON DON DON DON!
SO WHAT HAPPENED?
CAMERON
November 7th, 2007
There was a big white mansion with a lot of windows. On the third floor one of them was open. The detective walked in the mansion. He smelt soap and heard water running; it came from upstairs.
He looked on the wall and saw a picture. It was a dinner party. There was a long table with a man and a woman standing up holding wine glasses. There was also a butler with them.
The detective started to walk up the stairs. As he was getting near the third floor, the sound of running water became louder. It came from the bathroom. As he opened the door, the bath tub overflowed and water was everywere.
The window was open. There was no showerhead. The detective looked out the window. The showerhead was outside, on top of a bush it looked like some one had pulled it off.
Callum
November 7th, 2007
It was a very windy day and Mrs Steel was walking up the path to her next door neighbour. She was very worried because she haden’t heard from them for awhile. As she got nearer she noticed blood on the handle. She pushed the door open and as she did a rotten old smell hit her in the face.
As she walked further in she noticed everything was all torn and the sofa was all batterd and torn. She noticed something - a cricket bat lying on the floor, and as she went to look at something lying on the floor she heard a drip drip coming from the kitchen.
Mrs Steel walked into the kitchen to find that the sink was overflowing and there were letters and newspapers scattered all over the floor. She went over to the table and looked at a letter that caught her eye it said,”Dear Jon I hope you and Liz make up. I will be there at 12pm tomorrow just remember its only a game. love Mary.”
Mrs Steel turned round and spotted a picture of 2 people, one in a lovely white dress the other with a smart kilt with a hat saying I love you. Right next to it there was a card on it which said Happy Valentines.
by Lauren
November 7th, 2007
There was a for sale sign in the front garden with ropes lying around it. Barbara couldn’t find Bill. The house was a modern house that was in the country. When Barbara got in she found a long trail of rope with something brown on it. This day was a very long day sometime in October. When Barbara got nearer to the stairs she was afraid to go up and as she got to the second stair she saw a knife lying on the floor. It was a silver and black knife. Barbara just left it there. She came back down the stairs and walked through the hall.
She walked through a door which leads you to the kitchen. As she entered the kitchen she saw that the back door was wide open. When she looked at the floor she saw the ropes again. They were leading into the back garden. As she walked closer to the door she saw two broken wine glasses. She looked out the kitchen window and saw Bill. She shouted over, “One minute Bill”. He said, “OK”. Barbara went into the garden and started walking over to Bill. As she walked over to him she saw the ropes in the pool. She was walking over to Bill to tell him that she likes the house and wants to buy it. As she walked around the pool she just remembered that it was the last day of October and ….
November 4th, 2007
One sunny day Chris and Melisa were moving house and they had a little puppy called Rudolph - it was black and white. Rudolph liked to play outside. He liked to play fetch. It was Rudolph’s favourite thing to do, but the thing that scared Rudolph the most was the mansion. The way that he hated the mansion was because it was dark and he is scared of the dark and it was big, noisy and scary. Tomorow the family will be moving house.
The day had arrived. Chris and Melisa packed everething to move house. They put all of the equipment and they put it all in the truck. They took off, but Rudolph was still snuggled in like a little baby in his soft bed sleeping away. Two hours later Rudolph woke up and straight away he realised that all the equipment was gone. OH! Where are my owners? NO, they left without me! What am I going to do? I’m scared. I can’t believe everething didn’t go according to plan. Creek! Wwwhat was that? Rudolph went to check it out. It was nothing - it was just the door creeking.
Rudolph was crying. He wanted his owners. They were there at last. Melisa are we forgetting something? Rudolph. OK let’s go back. How am I going to get out? Rudolph where are you?
Rudolph started to run. Crack! Rudolph fell over a stick and hurt his head. Rudolph passed out. Half an hour later Rudolph woke up and he was lying on Melisa’s lap with a blanket on him and he was happy to be with his owners.
November 4th, 2007
Can you guess how this happend?
The house boat was small and red with smooth gleaming surfaces. The brass name plate on the front read “Fruitful Harvest”. So it would be a surprise to see the bow ripped and scratched. The boat seemed to be trapped in an eddy with the bow sticking into the shore of a fast flowing river.
The inside of the boat was crammed with pictures, some of which were unfinished. There were paints and paint brushes littering the floor. There was a math box and burger package floating in the water outside the boat.
On the deck you could see very small dusty windows lining the outside of the boat and the rope that would normally tie the boat up was snapped. The end of the rope was blackened and smelt of smoke.
Near the ripped rope, there was a Barbeque that had been knocked over. There were still some burning embers in it.
November 4th, 2007
There was a big house near the beach, with a golden roof. The place had been abandoned for years and looked very bad. Windows were broken, doors open, wind and rain were welcomed. Passing by, people could see birds flying strange, freely inside the house, and could hear strange, frightening noises. I also knew the house.
One day I decided to visit it. When I found myself in living room, I realised I was surrounded by pirates. They all hated me and soon started running after me. I ran faster and faster, I ran up the stairs, up the stairs. The pirates were right behind me.
November 4th, 2007
In an enormous mansion, the largest for miles around, it was bright,beautiful and posh.
There is a man coming from a car and a woman with a tennis racket. Then next the man went in to sitting room and he saw the women gone. There was a letter on the kitchen floor and it said
Dear my darling, I am going to the beach with friends, pay you back, I will miss you xxx.
So the man was walking to the beach and found a new factory. He fell over something but he did not know what it was. He looked in the factory and he saw a candle burning. 20 minutes later he got to the beach and she ran to him and said, “Let’s go home”.
The next day they got up and put on their swimming costumes and went out to the garden to go swimming.The man went to the car and took a big bunch of flowers out and she said, “I’m glad I have married you.” But he said “I’m going away to England to stay with my family”.
She took a knife and stabbed him on the arm and said, “Go away - I don’t need you.” And he said, “Darling I never liked you I just wanted your money.”
November 4th, 2007
It was the last day of October, the wind was blowing through the trees, throwing leaves up in the air and onto the windows of the brand new cottage on the edge of the Bridge of Don.
There were 2 cars parked outside. One of the cars was gone because the mother and father were out. Mathew and Martin were in the house themselves, with Rocky the dog. Rocky was upstairs sleeping calmly.
Mathew went to look at the calender and noticed the date, it was his favourite day. He ran through to tell Martin and they ran through to the cupboard and the next bit was a surprise.
November 4th, 2007
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