CHRISTMAS
November 2nd, 2007
Can you guess who lives in this mansion?
One cold snowy day there was a mansion in the village of Velleda. It looked beautiful and homely with the snow on the roof and all around it. The mansion stood out in the village of Velleda, but it was even more beautiful inside. As you walked in the big brown door on the posh porch there was a light brown mat that read welcome.
Then there were the beautiful brown shimmering floors and the very valuable ornaments balanced on the very valuable tables. Then as you walked into the gorgeous kitchen you could smell the Christmas dinner and there were decorations all over the mansion. The mansion was very valuable and it had very delicate items inside and out. Even the big brown door on the porch had a very intricate letterbox on it. This mansion was the most important building in the village because someone very important lived there.
By Amy Lowe
2 Comments Add your own
1. David | November 6th, 2007 at 4:55 pm
A good story. I really got a feel of the mansion; what it was like. Your created a good atmosphere. I think who lives there is someone who visits once a year. Am I right? Put me out of my misery.
2. Jenny | November 8th, 2007 at 9:43 pm
I enjoyed your descriptions of the mansion and really felt as if I could picture it. Is it a film star - or someone who gets lots of fan mail? Or perhaps it is a chef?
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