Youngsters’ Forum

COLD BLOODED KILLER

October 11th, 2007

This morning three detectives including myself were working at our desks when a police officer came into your office and told us an elderly lady called after she head aloud bang coming from her next-door neighbour. She lives at number 20 south elk street Aberdeen.

So i shut my laptop and ran to the car followed by the other two detectives. I let the other two detectives in first and drove as fast as i could. After five minutes we arrived.
The door was wide open. I got out the car and ran into the front hall. There was a puddle of red liquid on the floor. In the middle of the red liquid there was a shotgun shell. It was still hot.
The house was empty and quiet except there was a noise coming from the living room. The TV was still on. On the sofa there was a letter. It said I would get revenge.
On top of the fire there was a shelf on the shelf there was a photo. It was of three people playing football the people looked joyful
Suddenly something fell and smashed in the kitchen it was a bottle of Bacardi Breezier it had fallen out of an over crowed sink in the middle of sink there was a red ink bottle.
Suddenly there was a big slam in the garden. A trail of red liquid led me to the garden shed. i opened the door and found a body. It was one of the footballers in the photo. He had a shotgun wound to the middle of his chest. I reached out to fell for a pulse. Suddenly the victim opened his eyes. He pulled a pocket knife out of his pocket. What happens next?

by kieran at st peters school

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