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Cottage

December 18th, 2007


As he approached the cottage, wind chimes hanging from the porch echoed in the summer’s breeze, and a ‘missing’ poster flapped, but stayed firmly tied to the fence.The front gate creaked as he slowly pushed it open, and as he walked down the cracked garden path, to the sides of him were overgrown plants and uncut grass.  He also noticed a thin goat tied to a wooden post.

He stepped through the front door, which was hanging on one of its hinges.

The inside of the house had an obvious modern theme to it. On the coffee table in the small living room, there was a tear-stained marriage certificate among other documents and letters, indecipherable, as they appeared to have been soaked in water.

He edged back out into the hall, and his attention was drawn to a large tear in the carpet leading from the bottom of the stairs to the middle of the floor.

He walked up the small staircase, around 10 steps or so, to the only bedroom in the house. The upstairs smelled strongly of lavender, and was more old-fashioned than downstairs. Except it was a mess. There was blood on the pillows, the duvets were thrown into a heap, drawers tipped out and jewellery strewn on the floor, as if someone had left in a rush.

He fled from the house and sprinted through the quiet village, away from the horrifying scene that had met his eyes in the bathroom…

June

St Machar Academy

 

Entry Filed under: Animations, Search Inside, St Machar Academy, Writer in Residence

1 Comment Add your own

  • 1. David  |  May 6th, 2008 at 10:49 am

    You’ve created an atmosphere that is unnerving in this scene of domestic violence maybe and possibly murder. A real Alfred Hitchcock scene!
    David

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