Danger area
December 11th, 2007
As I walked by a posh neighbourhood. I noticed a house door was open with a smashed window. I thought I’d check it out I noticed a football lying on the floor with air coming out of it. As I walked along to the kitchen I saw a knife block and the biggest knife was missing. I started to panic. I am in a danger area. As I saw blood dripping from the fridge handle. I said to myself I should get out of here……………. AND QUICK
3 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | December 11th, 2007 at 9:45 pm
Yes - I think you should get out of there very quickly. I think something must have happened only seconds before you got there - the clue with the air coming out of the football was a good one! Keep writing.
2. Seaton | December 14th, 2007 at 2:28 pm
Thats a really good story small but good!! Its a realy good cliff hanger too i love it xxx
from leah
3. Seaton | December 14th, 2007 at 2:29 pm
Thats a really good mystery to solve! its also a good story i love it!! its a good cliff hanger aswell xx
from leah seaton
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