FLU?
December 11th, 2007
Once upon a time there was a young couple, called Sharpay and Ryan. They both had busy lifestyles and very demanding jobs, Ryan was a dentist and Sharpay was a model. They hardly ever saw each other. So one night they both decided they would come home at a set time and spend the evening together. So they did that.
Ryan made a lovely meal and they enjoyed that together. Then Sharpay made a lovely trifle for dessert, and they both enjoyed that. Then they sat down on the couch and watched television. Later on they both started to suffer from flu-like symptoms, sore head and feeling sleepy. So Sharpay decided to go to bed and see if she felt better in the morning. But Ryan stayed up watching television.
In the morning when neither of them arrived at work thier friends called them but there was no answer. after work Ryan and Sharpay’s friends went to the house and their cars were still in the drive. Later on the police had to break in to the house. They found Ryan unconscious on the staircase and found Sharpay in her bed in a coma….
by Liam P7 Sunnybank school.






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1. Jenny | December 11th, 2007 at 9:47 pm
Hello Liam
This doesn’t sound like normal flu to me - did they have carbon monoxide poisoning I wonder? Or was it something more sinister?
Write more so I can find out please!
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