Football Mad
February 22nd, 2007
Hello my name is Ryan,and I’m going to tell you all about my favourite players and team.So enjoy.
My favourite player would be Cristano Ronaldo,he’s my favourite because he is very good his skill is fantastic, and he has amazing boots. I think he is possibly the best player in the world.
My favourite team is the one I would would follow forever. It is Aberdeen. They have played really well and do deserve to play in the champions league .
My favourite Dons player is Russell Anderson ,I think he’s good because he plays in my position (centre half) and he plays amazing i watch carefully to pick up new skills(the way he defends and captins the team)to put in my game.
by ryan
Entry Filed under: Woodside
2 Comments Add your own
1. Amanda | February 22nd, 2007 at 5:16 pm
Liked the story. I like Ronaldo to.Roony is a good player aswell.
2. Moira | February 22nd, 2007 at 8:16 pm
I like your opening sentence; it describes clearly what you are going to write about. I like the way you included ’so enjoy’ as it made me think the writer is a nice, friendly kind of person.
I like how you organised your writing clearly into paragraphs. It makes it very easy to understand your work
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