Funny Horror Street
March 20th, 2007
One fine day there was something fishy going on in the street but there was no one staying there. They were always scared off by the salesman. He always says there were a lot of murders, which is true, but they need the money. One day one unusual family came to Aberdeen considine to buy a house. The first house they said was funny horror street. They said, “We’ll take it”. After that loads of people started to move in and you know why because they sacked the salesman otherwise known as Spiny. Spiny always thought of revenge but he always said to himself “how will I do it? Will I murder again? Scare them into moving out or even kidnap their kids?” That night Spiny had a nightmare about children dressed up as clowns he said, “I don’t like clowns.” But it wasn’t a dream. He woke up and there were about twenty clowns that made him angry. He got up and shouted to the of his lungs, all the kids started to cry, he laughed and laughed. They were only trying to cheer him up but it all went wrong this is when it all happened. When everyone was sleeping he dressed up into his big Krusty the Clown shoes and his dungarees with a Scream mask. He sneaked into the house it was number 31 and you know who that is, the family who got everyone to move in. He went in the kid’s room and stood on a dog’s toy by accident, the kid woke up and fell out of the window. Spiny said “all this years this is always happened to me.” The cops never caught Spiny because he never kills them. The next day they found the kid. Spiny looked out of the window laughing. The next stage was to go after the Mum and Dad this time he brought a gun. The police were already at the house so it was hard to get in; it was like a Batman movie. Eventually Spiny was caught and sent to prison for life. By Aaron
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14 Comments Add your own
1. Josh | March 20th, 2007 at 6:16 pm
Ace One Aaron Mrs Thomson Was Right Though U Do Like Deaths And Stuff Like That In Your Storys
2. Jenny | March 20th, 2007 at 8:49 pm
Hi Aaron
Great story - I am very glad I don’t live in that street. You have a great imagination and your story is very different - I enjoyed reading it.
Keep writing please!
3. marianne | April 20th, 2007 at 8:54 am
i think it is good
4. Carrie | April 20th, 2007 at 8:57 am
The story always kept you interested but sometimes I got a bit counfused because you missed out a word but it was still very good.
5. Natalia | April 20th, 2007 at 8:58 am
Your story is very original and your ideas are good but next time check your sory to see if certain parts it makes sense.
6. Bartosz | April 20th, 2007 at 8:58 am
Your story is funny and cool.
7. Amelia | April 20th, 2007 at 8:58 am
I think your story was very funny and imagnitive. I enjoyed it.
8. Ridhwaan | April 20th, 2007 at 8:59 am
amazing story i liked it although it kinda got muddled at times funny as well : |)
9. ASHLAY | April 20th, 2007 at 8:59 am
REALLY FUNNY STORY BUT SOME PARTS DIDNT MAKE SENSE
10. Megan | April 20th, 2007 at 8:59 am
You had a good story but it was quite confusing at times! More punctuation might help you!!
WELL DONE!!!
11. Matthew | April 20th, 2007 at 8:59 am
Great storyline Aaron but how did the child fall out the window? Keep writing! I’ll be waiting for the next nail-biting installment!!!
12. Harry | April 20th, 2007 at 9:00 am
Brilliant story I think the name is great for it because it is funny and scary it got a bit strange but it was ace
13. stpeters | April 20th, 2007 at 9:27 am
Your story is fab!I think your story is a bit spooky though.You are an ace,writer well done!
14. Seaton | May 9th, 2007 at 1:06 pm
ur story is cccccool
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