Ghost in Sunnybank
December 11th, 2007
After school I came back to collect my school bag. Got permission to go upstairs to the class. The classroom door was open, unlocked. Walked into the room. Door closed behind me. School bag was missing, the door was opening. Turned round. White suit, black eyes - a ghost ran under the table. Ghost walked towards the table. Over to the sink to wash his hands.
I found my bag and escaped. I ran out of the classroom and there was another ghost. I ran and ran and ran. The two ghosts ran after me. I saw my friend, “Please Help Me! There are two ghosts running after me ” I said to Keiran my friend in school. “There are ghosts in this school,” and he said “Oh no there isn’t”. “Oh yes there is!” “Okay, you win!” There was not just two ghosts, there were loads on the way down the steps. I saw Stevie. “Why are you running down the steps and on the way down the other steps we saw Liam.
“Why are you running down the steps?” shouted Liam. “Can’t talk!” “Why not ?” said Liam. “Because I am getting chased from ghosts!” “Okay, can I come?” “Okay………Hurry Up!!” “Coming,” shouted Liam. And we all went home.






2 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | December 12th, 2007 at 8:03 pm
I thought the very short sentences in the first paragraph worked really well and built up the excitement well. Was this a dream - or a nightmare?
2. corey | January 20th, 2009 at 8:57 pm
in my school i was talking to my friend when i heard a nois so i was going to my class and i so a littel white figuar
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