http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/hong-kong-and-the-vanitiy-fair The Reading Bus Blog features the writing of the community of Reading Bus users in Aberdeen, Scotland. Mon, 21 May 2012 19:54:25 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/hong-kong-and-the-vanitiy-fair#comment-5549 Moira Mon, 30 Apr 2007 19:55:14 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=550#comment-5549 I love the descriptive language you use in your dialogue. It can be difficult to keep dialogue interesting but I found that I was hooked and quickly got into the two characters. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ ON. PLEASE WRITE CHAPTER 2 VERY SOON. I love the descriptive language you use in your dialogue. It can be difficult to keep dialogue interesting but I found that I was hooked and quickly got into the two characters.
I CAN’T WAIT TO READ ON. PLEASE WRITE CHAPTER 2 VERY SOON.

]]> http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/hong-kong-and-the-vanitiy-fair#comment-5541 Jenny Mon, 30 Apr 2007 19:43:51 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=550#comment-5541 Hello Megan I enjoyed your first chapter - some great descriptions. I particularly liked - "her perfect brown curls bouncing with each graceful step she took". Keep writing - I am looking out for Chapter 2 Hello Megan
I enjoyed your first chapter - some great descriptions. I particularly liked - “her perfect brown curls bouncing with each graceful step she took”.
Keep writing - I am looking out for Chapter 2

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