It’s not fair
November 27th, 2006
“It’s not fair! Why do I have to go to school? Daniel doesn’t have to and besides I’m tired.”
“You still have to go to school. When you grow up you will become brainy. However you must stick in and do your work.”
”But I will lose my friends and I will get bullied if I become smart and Daniel will still have all his friends because he is older and in a bigger school than me unless you move me.”
“I can’t do that,” she said. “Now get off to school or selse there will be severe consequences,” she shouted.
I waddled off to school with an unhappy face and little drips of tears falling from the sky. The wind blowing through the trees was forcing my tears up my face. I wiped my tears and ran into school. I could actually hear the wind blowing through the air. Oh oh I think it will probably be an indoor play time. I finished my work and went home and I told my Mum what I did today. I did my work and was not bad.
Rikki Kittybrewster School
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7 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 27th, 2006 at 12:58 pm
Rikki - you made my day at Kittybrewster today by producing another fantastic piece of writing for the Reading Bus Blog. I particularly like the description of you going to school with the little drips of tears and the wind blowing.
I can’t wait for your next story - well done!
Jenny
2. Miss G | November 28th, 2006 at 12:21 pm
Wow! Rikki you are a fantastic writer. Did you used to go to Hanover Street? Would you like to come back for a day and read your story as a Primary 7 Reading Champion? You would get to see your old class and teacher again! Well done with your story! Fantastic! Miss Graham
3. Hannah | November 29th, 2006 at 4:08 am
well done like your story
4. lewis | November 29th, 2006 at 4:10 am
phamial story best Ever cant wait for the next story amazin
5. Elma | November 29th, 2006 at 5:09 am
I love the description of you feeling sad on your way to school, especially when you say the wind was blowing your tears up the way. keep up the good work, Rikki! :o)
6. Mr Ian Macindoe | December 4th, 2006 at 9:27 am
As your Head Teacher I am well chuffed Ricki with your ‘It’s Not Fair’ story.
It just goes to show what well talented and hard working pupils we have in Primary 7. Keep it up!
7. Sami + Carly | April 30th, 2007 at 8:27 am
hey Rikki i think u should b a writer u seem 2 b likin writin then bye c ya soon xx
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