Youngsters’ Forum

Murder Scene

November 23rd, 2007

In the middle of nowhere, it was a wintry cold storm. There lived an old man called George, who was very lonely. He was watching T.V and he heard the birds giving their signal to go sleep. He watched all the birds fly away. After that he went to get a drink of water, but the water wasn’t coming through! So George went outside to pump up the taps, just one thing he did wrong! He left the door open. 

Meanwhile someone came into the old Cottage and hid in the kitchen. Five minutes after, George came back in and went straight to the kitchen to get a drink, gladly the water was coming through! As he was away to go back to the window he got stabbed twice in the back. He was left to die in pain for 10 whole minutes.

Shortly after, he died. The killer took George’s body up the stairs. And put it in the room and locked it. About 3 months later the killer turned the old cottage into a museum. Plenty of people came to see the museum. It cost £12.00 for an adult and £2.00 for a child to come in and see the museum. But one day a family came into see the museum and the killer was giving them a tour of the house, he said “ and this is his room where he studied about birds”. The teenager was part of the family who were coming to see the museum went upstairs when you were not allowed up stairs.

She tried to open the door where George’s body was but it was locked. She went into the bathroom the bath was full of blood with a dead body lying in it. She screamed so loud, her mum and dad came running up the stairs, they asked her what was wrong? She pointed to the bath they all screamed. The killer ran up the stairs and killed them all!

By Ashleigh

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