My Cottage
November 2nd, 2007
Who do you thinks lives in this cottage?
Someone’s car broke down outside and they walked in to the house. It was covered in leaves. I smelt the warm smell of cottage pie as I walked into the kitchen. There was one very large chair, one medium chair and one small chair. I walked into the bedroom there was one very large bed, one medium bed and one small bed I sat on the small bed. It was lumpy - “Ah!” I screamed. There was a giant shrimp in this bed and I ran all the way back to my house.
Leighona Setchfield
2 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 8th, 2007 at 9:45 pm
I wonder if this is a modern take on Goldilocks and the Three Bears?
I did enjoy the surprise of a shrimp being in the bed!
Great writing - keep going
2. Machar | November 21st, 2007 at 2:01 pm
i think its a bit like goldilocks and the three bears
it would of been nice if the story was a bit longer..
the shrimp in the bed sounded creepy .. i would have run out of the house as well
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