My former goldfish
November 30th, 2006
I used to have a goldfish and his name was Speedy. He was a brownish gold and he was 2 years old. I named him Speedy because he was fast like a Ferrari. He used to play with my sister’s one and they were like best friends. My sister’s one was all gold and it was cute. One day I was at school a week before my birthday and he died. I had a funeral for him. This day forth I haven’t forgot about him.
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1. Samantha x | November 30th, 2006 at 2:31 am
Go your self that story was very emotional! But very good!
2. Russell | November 30th, 2006 at 4:13 am
I really enjoyed this story too. And I liked the way you compared ‘Speedy’ to a Ferari - very funny.
I thought it had a good title, which was appropriate for the whole story up to the moving last line.
3. tony .v | January 25th, 2007 at 4:06 pm
its good
4. hannah | February 2nd, 2007 at 2:56 pm
hi hows that
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