My hamster
November 23rd, 2006
My hamster is called Sparkle. He is brown with shades of black through his fur. He sometimes bites and it is painful. I clean him twice a week. He eats his hamster food. He gets lots of exercise by rolling in his hamster ball and by playing with my rabbit. I pretend he is a parrot because he sits on my shoulder. He eats lettuce and their life span is two or three years.
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1. Elma | November 24th, 2006 at 2:05 am
I really like your description of the hamster, and how he sits on your shoulder like a parrot. I can just imagine that!
2. Russell | November 29th, 2006 at 10:20 am
I really enjoyed reading your story about Sparkle.
I think you could have left out the last line, “He eats lettuce and their life span is two or three years.” I think the sentence before that would make a much better ending.
3. David | November 30th, 2006 at 2:02 am
I like the way u said ur cat sites on ur shoulder.
Stick in there
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