My Hopes and Dreams
June 13th, 2007
My Hopes and Dreams
I have some hopes and dreams. I believe nothing is impossible with hard work and a picture of what you are aiming for. Surely everyone dreams? It’s what you do with that dreaming that matters.
I hope to do well in school and be a confident individual, a successful learner, a responsible citizen and an effective contributor. I want to pass all my exams. If I do then I can do anything I want and will have lots of choices to make.
My other hope is to be as awesome and skilful as Cristiano Ronaldo. Everyone loves him. He inspires me because when he was told there was no hope, he still made it big and now I’ll do the same.
But above all my hopes, there is a dream and to make this dream a reality I need support [which I already get from friends, family and teachers]. That dream is to become a famous person. If this was to happen then I think I could do great things to help people and of course, I’d be rich!
By Anesu
Entry Filed under: Hanover Street
4 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | June 24th, 2007 at 7:28 pm
Very powerful writing - it is great to have such ambitious dreams and hopes. I hope as you go through secondary school you stay focused, work hard, have fun and value your friendships - I am sure you will have lots of choices and will choose well.
Good use of paragraphs and punctuation. Good luck as you move onto first year - keep writing.
2. Miss G | June 24th, 2007 at 9:22 pm
A fantastic piece of writing Anesu! You have caught the readers with your choice of phrases! Keep working on your writing you have a true gift!
3. Russell | June 25th, 2007 at 12:03 am
Wow Anesu, that really was great writing. I feel inspired reading it. I’m glad you realise how important it is to try hard at school… you do only get one chance at it afterall.
I personally don’t think you should worry about fame and getting rich. I reckon Ronaldo was just thinking he would do the best he could with the skills he had. I admire him and anyone else that can do that.
4. vicrum | July 22nd, 2007 at 5:25 pm
I love your story its so cool
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