My House
November 2nd, 2007
Who lives in this house?
In a quiet neighbourhood in the country there was a big house with an open door I thought I should go and see what was in it. There were trophies and beside it was a very short note. I read the note ,it said gone out to the match I will be back soon love…….I started to look in the living room I saw a pair of boots and a strip with number 1 on it . The strip was padded. I heard a dog bark. It came from upstairs.
I crept up slowly and opened the bedroom door sitting there was Labrador puppy. I heard a thump and ran down stairs and in the closet I hid. It was crammed with bikes and old toys. I heard someone speak they said “is anyone there? Then they went upstairs and I ran out of the closet and out the front door. Jason Curley
Entry Filed under: Donbank, Schools, Writer in Residence, Writing
2 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 8th, 2007 at 9:50 pm
I think the person in this house is a good sports person - probably football but could be hockey or rugby? I think something has happened to someone in the house - but I don’t know what!
Tell me more please.
2. Darran Hainey | February 14th, 2008 at 3:04 pm
This Is Not A Bad Story But I Think You Could Improve A Lot.
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