my mates courtney , keira , ashley
March 20th, 2007
courtney is really cool mate she talks me on msn all the time.courtney always likes to be nice to people . courtneys is nice,kind and generous. courtneys best mate is naomi. naomi goes to courtneys house all the time. at playtime courtney plays with me , naomi , amy , demi. courtney has a dog called winston hes so cute.
keira is a cool mate she ma little baby girl.keiras mum has the same name as me her mum is really nice.keira has a dog called sky she is so cute she has a coat with a hoot on the coat it says princess.keira is nice , funny a little adorable girl.she plays wth me and courtney and more sometimes . she plays with her friends as well.
ashley is my 2 little girl.ashley has 2 dogs called storm and diesel . ashelys mum is very nice she makes me laugh.ashley makes me laugh alot.ashley and i love playing games with keira.keira is ashleys best friend.diesel and storm has cute little outfit i love them. ashley is kind , funny and a cool friend.
by lucy
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1. Jenny | March 20th, 2007 at 8:47 pm
Hi Lucy
Enjoyed reading about your mates - they all sound like really good mates to have. You did well organising your writing into paragraphs - try to remember a capital letter at the start of each sentence!
Keep writing
2. Russell | March 26th, 2007 at 4:19 pm
Hia,
It does sound like you have a great group of friends. I’m sure you all have a lot of fun with the dogs.
I liked the way you wrote about your different friends in different paragraphs. There are some spaces in odd places - that’s the type of thing you might see when you check over your work.
Thanks for sharing your story about your friends. It makes for a fun read.!
3. chelsea | March 28th, 2007 at 11:13 am
well done that was really gd from chelsea.xxx.
4. stpeters | April 20th, 2007 at 9:16 am
It was cool to read about your mates but I didn’t really understand the parts when you said that Keira and Ashley were baby girls…
Good writing!!
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