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my poem

February 22nd, 2007

Her bright blue eyes,

caught the bright blue sea,

bashing off the rocks,

Her blonde hair,

was swaying in the wind,

like a fluent bird,

Her pink top,

stuck out like a,

sore thumb.

By Craig

Entry Filed under: Woodside

3 Comments Add your own

  • 1. chikondi  |  February 22nd, 2007 at 9:51 pm

    I like your poem its very good.

  • 2. Miss MacDonald  |  February 24th, 2007 at 2:38 pm

    You have included lots of good imagery in your poem.

  • 3. Mrs Ross  |  February 26th, 2007 at 2:12 pm

    I enjoyed reading your poem - super similes!

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