Mysterious
November 2nd, 2007
Halloween 2007
I was just getting ready to go to bed it was 11.30 at night. I was in bed for about five minutes then suddenly I heard a great big bang!!! What was that? I walked down stairs to get to the front door. I walked down a deserted motorway only to find a police public call box - what is a blue box doing in the middle of a motorway?
I went to investigate the weird box thing. I was just about to open the door when a glow went through the doors it was a kind of bright light. I woke up in a prison cell I could see someone looking down at me/. He had lots of spots on his face he looked like he had skin disease. He walked away with a knife in his hand. I got to get out of here I thought but how? I tried to get off but he tied me up to a chair. So I had no choice but to run with the chair attached to me.
I ran into a living room - it smelt like vinegar and I saw a lump of red on the plate CANNIBALS!!!! I thought. I went in the kitchen and I saw a raw lemon cake on the desktop yuck! I went into a bedroom with pictures on the wall of people eating human flesh. I was so freaked out I did a runner. By Darren P7 finished
Entry Filed under: Donbank, Schools, Writer in Residence, Writing






4 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 8th, 2007 at 9:58 pm
You have got a fantastic imagination! This is a great story line with a blue box in the middle of a motorway - a bit like the tardis in Doctor Who. I found the storyline about Cannibals a surprise and a bit scary - not surprised you ran away! Did you escape?
2. Kitty | December 19th, 2007 at 9:39 am
darren you have good ideas well done jade
3. Not Telling You | February 1st, 2008 at 9:19 pm
This Is Simply The Best Storyline Ever In The History Of The World !!!!!!!!! Good Job To Darren Hainey.
4. silver snake | February 14th, 2008 at 2:53 pm
Truly the best in the world [obviously because it is you Darran]
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