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Mystery Mystery!

November 7th, 2007

It all began one very very hot day in the middle of Spain. I was walking by this really big house. Almost like a mansion. I couldn’t help but have a look in the window. When I was walking over to the house I noticed it was pink. Anyway, I looked through the window. Everything was quiet, so I decided to take a look inside.

I went through the back door just in case anyone saw me going in. As I was walking round I noticed there was a huge swimming pool. As I walked past the pool sprinklers of water came up from the ground. I ran so that I never got soaked. When I got inside, standing right in front of me was a huge staircase. I went up them to see if I could find a towel as I was wet from head to toe in water.  I decided to look in a bedroom, thinking that I keep my towels in my room so they might. I went in the room; it was all pink. There were glass doors open, leading out onto a balcony. I walked over and looked into the wardrobe. Everything was pink pink pink pink. I finally found a towel and dried my hair off. As I was sneaking  around upstairs I thought I heard someone  messing around down stairs. I thought to myself OH NO I’ve been caught. I sneaked downstairs to see if I could find out what it was or even who it was. There was nothing there. I thought oh well it’s just my mind playing tricks on me again, but it wouldn’t be the first time.

As I was walking  back up the stairs I heard it again, only this time I was almost certain it was not my mind or imagination. So I went downstairs. As I was walking down past the front door a postcard came through the letter box. I picked it up to see what it said. it said. Dear Charley I knew it was you. Don’t do anything stupid. I have told Natalie and Leah. They think its the best thing that’s ever happened. See you soon from Maren.

I didn’t have a clue what it was so as I went through to the kiitchen. I heard someone sayDon’t do anything  stupid. Well too late! Then I thought Oh no! It said on the postcard Dont do anything stupid so it might be that the person has read it and shouted it all out. Then I heard the doors lock. Oh no, I thought to myself, I’ve been locked in. I tried to run to the back door but I fell and broke a nail, then when I tried to get up I broke a heel on my shoe. Time for a shopping trip if I ever get out of here. As I was just approaching the back door I heard it lock. I was locked in. I wondered how long for. In the end I found out the girl won thouands of pounds and she had spent it all on the house. In the end we all became friends and moved in with her.

Kaitlyn  

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