neringa is da best friend eva in the whole world !!!!1
February 26th, 2007
Hello my name is Demi and my best friend is neringa because she is so so cool .me and neringa go everywhere together and we have been mates for almost a year now.we always have sleepovers at each others house.neringa has a little kitten called snowflake.she has green eyes and is all white.neringa always wants to go places like the boardwalk,swimming,cinema,codonas,lazer tag and loads more.wherever i go she will always most defently come with me.nobody will ever be a best friend like neringa even if i go away somewhere else ill always think of her 24.7.But i will also think of some other people in my class because i have loads more mates than neringa but she is the best friend ever on the whole entire world and always will be .ok thats all i gotta say bye bye folks. By Demi at woodside school (primary 7) xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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1. Jenny | February 26th, 2007 at 8:40 pm
Hello Demi
I enjoyed reading your story. I can tell that you and Neringa are very good friends. It’s great to have a best friend but lots of other mates as well.
I think your story would have been even better if you had remembered a few capital letters - at the start of a name and the start of a new sentence.
Keep writing - I’d love to read more!
2. Elma | February 27th, 2007 at 4:00 pm
I agree with Jenny, Demi - you’ve got the full stops in the right places so it should be easy to figure out where the capital letter go!
I wonder if you and Neringa will always be best friends? That’s a nice idea, isn’t it? I’m still friends with the girl I was best friends with at playschool (although we don’t see quite so much of each other these days!)
3. Anonymous | March 2nd, 2007 at 6:24 pm
Hi Demi,i thought it was good! AMANDA.J
4. gemma | March 5th, 2007 at 2:39 pm
hi demi i was one of neringas OLD FRIENDS from her old school just to let you know who i am anyway cya
5. samantha | March 5th, 2007 at 2:40 pm
hi Demi can you tell Neringa it is her old best friend from haonover tell her i miss her so much and thank you for the 1st birthday card .(hahahaha)
miss you sooooooooo much samantha hanover street .
6. louise | March 10th, 2007 at 4:20 pm
hi demi tell neringa it louise from hanny
7. Woodside | May 14th, 2007 at 8:34 pm
louise gemma sammy i miss you so mutch guys
8. Woodside | October 2nd, 2007 at 6:07 pm
I liked your setting as well Demi!
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