Orks and Witches
November 14th, 2006
Once upon a time there was dark place with witches, trolls and scary people called orks that could dig tunnels with their tiny nails and sometimes with their rusty old shovels.
There was a freaky old man in the distance with a big axe in his left hand. Beside him stood his wife who was a witch. They both hated these orks and had a plan in mind to kill them.
The witch snatched her broomstick and flew and cast a spell on them.
“Bata bang! Bata boom!” she yelled.
The orks turned into frogs and the witch flew back home and told her husband what she had just done.
The witch and the old man celebrated for nights and days until a huge dragon flew over their house. The witch heard the flapping of the dragon’s wings.
“What was that?” shouted the witch. “Let’s go and see.”
The witch crept along but the dragon spotted her and breathed fire all over her. She shrivelled up and melted away.
The old man fell onto his knees and started to cry. He was never horrible again and made sure the frogs were safe.
by Rikki
Kittybrewster Primary
Entry Filed under: Kittybrewster
22 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | November 14th, 2006 at 11:54 am
What a great story - full of expression. Well done Rikki - you are the first person from Kittybrewster to write a blog for the Reading Bus and I know you did a lot of it in your own time. Hope lots more blogs follow on from Kittybrewster.
2. Andy Watson | November 14th, 2006 at 2:57 pm
A very good story. It has all the things you expect in a fairytale with a good ending where a bad person learns a lesson.
3. Elma | November 15th, 2006 at 7:40 am
Rikki, this is a fantastic story - I’m really impressed. You’ve got some great description in there, like the orks digging with their “tiny nails,” the “rusty old shovels” and the “freaky old man.” I also like how you’ve used words like “snatched” and “shrivelled.” I wish I could use my pink pen here to highlight the great words you’ve chosen! Well done. :o)
4. joshua | November 20th, 2006 at 1:48 am
That was a good story. Very well written.
5. Shaunie and Jenna | November 20th, 2006 at 1:49 am
Your story is great it is fantastic.
6. Fraser and Adam | November 20th, 2006 at 1:50 am
Rikki’s story
Reminds me of Lord of the rings and has good spelling and good words.
7. sara, pawel | November 20th, 2006 at 1:50 am
Thank you rikki for writtting a lovely story. I liked the story .
8. Jordan and Greg | November 20th, 2006 at 1:50 am
Rikky it was a funntastic story we reallyb enjoyed it
9. Nico and Mateusz | November 20th, 2006 at 1:51 am
It is a great story my friend and I really liked it well done Rikki.
10. Calum Kamil | November 20th, 2006 at 1:51 am
We liked the story because of the little orks.
11. juuso | November 20th, 2006 at 8:56 am
hello its Juuso here i loved your story Rikki.
12. Jamie | November 21st, 2006 at 10:57 am
it was amazing rickster
13. Daniel | November 30th, 2006 at 2:15 am
Great Rikki I liked the way you wrote about the Orks.
14. shantel | November 30th, 2006 at 5:19 am
excelant story
15. samantha | December 6th, 2006 at 1:52 pm
l ace story
16. santtu & erica & mea & juuso | January 6th, 2007 at 10:14 pm
hi its me juuso and some of my best friends in finland i loved the story rikki and lots of hellos from us in FINLAND!!!!!!!!!!
17. Anonymous | January 12th, 2007 at 5:52 pm
i lik rikkis story
from sara and zara
18. rikki | February 18th, 2007 at 10:53 pm
brilliant story son keep up this good writing well done from mumand your family
19. Donbank | February 26th, 2007 at 11:42 am
hiya rikki it’s seonaid,harleigh,stephanie and chealsea-leigh from donban do you remember us from the ski trip good story from seonaid
20. chris.b | March 24th, 2007 at 9:09 am
amazing story
21. Sami + Carly | April 30th, 2007 at 8:29 am
hey did u lik the ski trip bud c a soon xx
22. jamie and juuso =] | June 1st, 2007 at 10:41 am
hi riks i think it was ace story i think at least but keep trucking=](juuso)
hello(JAmie)
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