PENGUINS
April 27th, 2007
PENGUINS ARE SO CUTE,
THEY WADDLE AND THEY WIGGLE,
THEY’RE FUNNY LITTLE CREATURES
AND THE REALLY MAKE ME GIGGLE.
I LIKE THE WAY THEY SWIM
AND THE WAY THEY FEED THERE CHICKS,
THEY’RE ALWAYS UP TO SOMETHING
WITH THEY’RE FUNNY LITTLE TRICKS.
IT’S TRUE THAT I LOVE PENGUINS
I REALLY, REALLY DO
I CAN’T WAIT UNTILL THE NEXT TIME
I SEE THEM AT THE ZOO
BY ASHLAY P7 (WRITTEN IN P6)
Entry Filed under: St Peter's RC
3 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | April 30th, 2007 at 7:49 pm
Hello Ashlay
What a lovely poem about penguins - I love them too. I once saw some fairy penguins in Australia and they were just adorable.
Hope you get to see some soon!
Keep writing please.
2. Moira | April 30th, 2007 at 7:58 pm
I really like the rhythm in your poem; it is great to read aloud. It is difficult to make a poem rhyme and make sense at the same time and I think you have achieved both extremely well.
3. Donbank | May 17th, 2007 at 4:29 pm
Hi i agree with u that penguins r cute bye Oh wait a minute i almost forgot to tell u if ur poem was good or not it was really good i luv it bye for good
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