playing in the beach
February 26th, 2007
one day I went to the beach. My friends came too and we
were making sandcastle.We were digging and we found
something strange so we went to my house to tell my mum
and then she came to the beach with us .She saw a skull and I asked
If I coud take it home and she said no. I then put it back.
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6 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | February 26th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
Hello. I enjoyed reading your story. I wonder what would have happened if you took the skull home - do you think it would have been like the Seal Skull? Or maybe it was a different skull with a different adventure. It would be great if you could write some more for us.
2. stephanie | February 27th, 2007 at 10:36 am
hi frances this is a good story but you need to explain it more
3. Elma | February 27th, 2007 at 4:08 pm
You worked very hard on this - well done.
I wonder if the skull was human, or a sea creature or some other kind of animal? I’d like to know what might have happened if you’d taken the skull home.
4. sarah | March 9th, 2007 at 2:45 pm
Hi Frances you’r story was good but you didn’t explain it good.Next time you write a story you could explain it better
5. June | March 10th, 2007 at 7:26 pm
Have you heard of the seal skull? It sounds kinda like your story.
p.s. write more next time
6. Asha-Leigh | May 6th, 2007 at 12:16 pm
Heyah Frances
Your story was good!!
But add more next time =]
Bye x o x o
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