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Gemma and Etele | November 3rd, 2006 at 2:08 am
Very good poem and made us laugh but some spelling mistakes have been made.
2.
mohammed | November 3rd, 2006 at 2:10 am
what a poem.Really interesting and good adjectives!!!!!!!
3.
Jason and Sean | November 3rd, 2006 at 2:15 am
It is really funny and cool. It has good describing words and crazy, colourful drawings. WELL DONE! GREAT POEM.
4.
Jenny | November 12th, 2006 at 11:37 am
Well done - your poem is full of humour with great illustrations. It is also on the Reading Bus where lots of people are enjoying reading it. Keep on writing!
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taylor jamieson | November 22nd, 2006 at 11:28 am
hey camerin its taylor from ur class ur poem is exellent keep up the good work see ya later xxxxxxxxxxxxx
5 Comments Add your own
1. Gemma and Etele | November 3rd, 2006 at 2:08 am
Very good poem and made us laugh but some spelling mistakes have been made.
2. mohammed | November 3rd, 2006 at 2:10 am
what a poem.Really interesting and good adjectives!!!!!!!
3. Jason and Sean | November 3rd, 2006 at 2:15 am
It is really funny and cool. It has good describing words and crazy, colourful drawings. WELL DONE! GREAT POEM.
4. Jenny | November 12th, 2006 at 11:37 am
Well done - your poem is full of humour with great illustrations. It is also on the Reading Bus where lots of people are enjoying reading it. Keep on writing!
5. taylor jamieson | November 22nd, 2006 at 11:28 am
hey camerin its taylor from ur class ur poem is exellent keep up the good work see ya later xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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