Scary house
December 14th, 2007
On the morning of December 4th it was sunny. I brushed my teeth and got dressed. When I went outside I saw a big pink house and the door was open. I stood beside the door and knocked on it but no one answered. So I went in. It was a like a palace and it smelt of perfume. It was a great smell.
I walked over to a door which said Dressing Room. I went in. It was a mess and there were shoes and dresses all over the floor. I picked up a dress, and there was also a diary which said, “Fashion Show on Monday December the 5th”. I was scared because there was red lipstick on the wall. There were fashion magazines on the floor. I went upstairs and there were photographs of models and wool and knitting needles on the floor. The phone was also on the floor, with make-up scattered around.
I went down the stairs into the kitchen and saw photographs of family pets. I saw a piece of paper and it said, “Stock Number 536″. I was getting a bit scared and ran out of the door.
Jade
Seaton Primary School
Entry Filed under: Schools, Search Inside, Seaton, Writer in Residence






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1. Kitty | December 19th, 2007 at 9:37 am
i loked the staret of it and youu have my name
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