Scottish Renga 2
January 26th, 2007
By Primary 5, Cornhill School
Scotland is a smart place to live.
With the very huge mountains
and bonny big cities.
Scotland is really pretty.
Thistles are our emblem.
A Scottish tradition.
Haggis, potatoes, good for eating.
The flag is blue, white, big.
Robbie Burns was a famous poet
William Wallace was a hero
Like Robert the Bruce
About 700 years ago
Scotland footballers are ace
Glasgow is Celtics home
My favourite Scottish team
Their colours are white and green
Dennis Law is a famous footballer
My dear Great Grandad’s brother
He played for Scotland
He makes me proud
Scotland’s got everything:
Landmarks
Wildlife
Fish and chips
Cornhill School, in the city of Aberdeen
Scotland is the best.
Contributors: Amber, Hannah, Shannen, May ling, Laura, Lauren H, Taylor, Callum, Tyler, Liam, Aimé, Jordan, Hayden, Gregor, Kirsty, Melissa,
Entry Filed under: Cornhill
6 Comments Add your own
1. Woodside | January 26th, 2007 at 4:05 pm
I LOVE celtic too . i think your story is ACE!!!!!
2. Russell | January 28th, 2007 at 4:20 am
Yeah that was a good poem - Scotland is the best I agree!
That poem sure did cover a lot of the Scottish identity. I really liked the way the heroes and emblems were given a personal twist with lines like
and
Good poem!
3. Jenny | January 28th, 2007 at 8:07 pm
Well done Primary 5 - your renga is great. I look forward to hearing you read it out on your next session on the Reading Bus.
4. Woodside | February 1st, 2007 at 7:46 pm
well done by lucy
5. Taylor | February 7th, 2007 at 1:55 pm
Ace poem i write the top bit of scooting renga 2
6. chay | February 10th, 2007 at 8:40 pm
hayah cornhill itz chay here am mising yous all so much especialy the teacherz and the food by the dinner ladys so any wayz how are all u’z doing well this is 4 the p7 just 2 tell u’z that secondry school might seem big but its raelly good and u make heaps of friends =) coz i have. oh and me and raegen might b making a radio show thing 4 CORNHILL best school eva. well i will talk 2 u’z soon luv ya frm chay xxxxx
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