Sharks
April 27th, 2007
Super sharks are blue and wonderful
happy sharks are very cheery
And they are very silk and smooth
ravenous sharks can be big and scary
knowing sharks there not that scary
so help them stop being extinct!!!
Entry Filed under: St Peter's RC
4 Comments Add your own
1. Megan | April 27th, 2007 at 9:04 am
very easy to guess that sam wrote this.
nice poem
2. ridhwaan | April 27th, 2007 at 9:10 am
sharks r ace
3. Jenny | April 30th, 2007 at 7:58 pm
I really liked this poem because it had a surprise ending. I think writing like this helps people to protect animals - well done.
Your poem would be even better with a little more punctuation! Keep writing
4. Moira | April 30th, 2007 at 8:17 pm
Most people write negatively about sharks so it was really nice to read a poem that included so many nice descriptions of sharks.
Your poem could be improved if you looked at the punctuation again.
Please write another blog about something else that you like.
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