http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/sharks The Reading Bus Blog features the writing of the community of Reading Bus users in Aberdeen, Scotland. Tue, 22 May 2012 12:17:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/sharks#comment-5558 Moira Mon, 30 Apr 2007 20:17:16 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=413#comment-5558 Most people write negatively about sharks so it was really nice to read a poem that included so many nice descriptions of sharks. Your poem could be improved if you looked at the punctuation again. Please write another blog about something else that you like. Most people write negatively about sharks so it was really nice to read a poem that included so many nice descriptions of sharks.
Your poem could be improved if you looked at the punctuation again.
Please write another blog about something else that you like.

]]> http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/sharks#comment-5551 Jenny Mon, 30 Apr 2007 19:58:12 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=413#comment-5551 I really liked this poem because it had a surprise ending. I think writing like this helps people to protect animals - well done. Your poem would be even better with a little more punctuation! Keep writing I really liked this poem because it had a surprise ending. I think writing like this helps people to protect animals - well done.
Your poem would be even better with a little more punctuation! Keep writing

]]> http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/sharks#comment-4541 ridhwaan Fri, 27 Apr 2007 09:10:06 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=413#comment-4541 sharks r ace sharks r ace

]]> http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/archives/sharks#comment-4528 Megan Fri, 27 Apr 2007 09:04:27 +0000 http://www.readingbus.co.uk/ReadingBusBlog/?p=413#comment-4528 very easy to guess that sam wrote this. nice poem very easy to guess that sam wrote this.
nice poem

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