Spooky house
October 9th, 2007
There was a big house,two people lived in it. There was dust everywhere. All you could see was a black room with heaps of old things.
The two people moved house because they kept hearing things at night.It sounded like a ghost tapping and you could also hear bangs on the wall, bang,bang,bang. Thats why they ran away because the girl called Carris was so scared because something tapped her on her shoulder and when she turned around nothing was there. It was so scary she didn’t know what to do.
Carris was a little girl who lived with her mum ,Wilma.She was only 8 years old and she wanted to move house because she kept hearing scary noises coming from her bedroom.
It was this time I decided to see what was going on. I went in the house and it was dark and creepy and you could barely see but you could hear someone on the floor upstairs.I went upstairs and the sound seemed to be coming from Carris’ bedroom. Iwent to see what was in her bedroom.It was really,really spooky.
by Shannon.Woodside School. The End






2 Comments Add your own
1. Woodside | October 13th, 2007 at 9:44 am
i thoght my story was ok
2. Woodside | October 13th, 2007 at 9:47 am
i thought youre story was realy good i liked the bit when you said you were away to find out
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