Stealing Stevie
December 11th, 2006
STEALING STEVIE
There was once a girl called stealing Stevie. She was the worst girl in town no one even dared to even look at her dark black frizzy bush of hair. When she walked down the street, people like Mrs Fisher (the most nosey person in town), wouldn’t even look back to look at her.
When Stevie walked past everyone would hold their handbags just in case they disappeared into thin air, although people never saw her face. Her hair was always flung over her face. People like Mrs Fisher described her, as mean, moody, hairy, and unwanted but no one knew if it was true.
The next morning she got out of bed feeling clean, fresh and cheerful. She opened her window and flung her hair back everyone saw her face it was beautiful, her heart suddenly filled with love.
She saw a postman and said “Hello how are you?”. He said “Very well,” She looked around and couldn’t believe the sight. She had missed so much by always hiding her face. Not anymore!
By Gemma P7
Entry Filed under: Hanover Street
11 Comments Add your own
1. Jenny | December 11th, 2006 at 10:45 am
Hello Gemma
I loved your description of Stealing Stevie - I really felt as if I had a picture of her in my head. Your story left me wanting to know more - which is the always a compliment to the writer! I am wondering what happened to make Stealing Stevie change? What was her life like after her heart was filled with love?
Well done - great writing!
Jenny
2. Andy | December 14th, 2006 at 8:13 am
Like the last person who commented, I think this is a super story and would like to hear more about Stealing Stevie.
3. sean | February 3rd, 2007 at 9:42 pm
good story gemma from john
4. Louise | February 9th, 2007 at 7:03 pm
hi gemma like the story it is so cool!
5. Mohammed | February 20th, 2007 at 10:18 am
Well dne Gemma keep it up!!!! Mohammed!!!
6. NERINGA | March 2nd, 2007 at 5:45 pm
hey gemma its me neringa i really miss hanover but the story was great i enjoyed reading it it was cool see you soon:)
7. Gemma and Etele | March 5th, 2007 at 2:33 pm
great story it iz ace from daniel
8. Mohammed | March 5th, 2007 at 2:40 pm
Hi gems its mohammed Excellent work keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
9. Mohammed | March 5th, 2007 at 2:41 pm
Well done gems you are a star xxxxxxx
10. chris | June 8th, 2007 at 10:09 am
GREAT STORY GEMMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
11. moammedd | June 8th, 2007 at 10:10 am
nice story very good 11111111111111111111111111111111
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