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The Abandoned Cottage

November 7th, 2007

One miserable day,detective Joe Cameron was having a drive in the country and passed a luxury cottage. But he thought there was something strange going on, so he drove up the dull drive and parked his car.  He approached with caution and then he noticed a smashed window. There was also a smell of dead rat in the air.

Detective Joe Cameron entired the million pound cottage with care. He walked over the rammed down door and entered the kitchen first. The dective noticed that all the flowers and fruit had died and he smelt onion and garlic. He thought to himself that nobody had been there in a long time.  The cottage was freezing, so the electricty had been turned off.

He entered the living room next and noticed there were blood stains all over the floor and sofa . The veranda door was wide open. The blood stains led out into the veranda and out into the garden.  There was smashed glass all over the floor.  The detective walked into the garden and spotted a gun in the grass.  Then he noticed there were blood stains on shed door.  So what happened ?

DON DON DON DON DON!

SO WHAT HAPPENED?

CAMERON                                                                            

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