The Ash Tree
April 20th, 2007
Stoney,rocky,made of wood.Huge as a mountain,tall as a giant,wavy pattern,riged and spiky, protective and dark we the explorers of the seven trees discoverd the monstous hole that lead right through like a cave. the outside of the cave was scaley like a snake.
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1. Jenny | April 30th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Hello
Really great descriptions - loved the phrase “wavy, pattern, ridged and spiky”.
I know you wrote this poem very quickly but next time try to think about new lines and the shape of your poem.
Great writing though - well done!
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