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The Big Mansion

November 7th, 2007

It was a very windy day and Mrs Steel was walking up the path to her next door neighbour. She was very worried because she haden’t heard from them for awhile. As she got nearer she noticed blood on the handle. She pushed the door open and as she did a rotten old smell hit her in the face.

As she walked further in she noticed everything was all torn and the sofa was all batterd and torn. She noticed something - a cricket bat lying on the floor, and as she went to look at something lying on the floor she heard a drip drip coming from the kitchen.

Mrs Steel walked into the kitchen to find that the sink was overflowing and there were letters and newspapers scattered all over the floor. She went over to the table and looked at a letter that caught her eye it said,”Dear Jon I hope you and Liz make up. I will be there at 12pm tomorrow just remember its only a game. love Mary.”

Mrs Steel turned round and spotted a picture of 2 people, one in a lovely white dress the other with a smart kilt with a hat saying I love you. Right next to it there was a card on it which said Happy Valentines.

by Lauren             

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